TIER- yes I do realize that dumb ass, I said ignore the add ons, I'm barely starting to work on add ons, I've been writing over a half year now. I shouldn't even have crowns and gay shit like that yet, but I'm trying to figure out new shit to throw on it.

Bink1- thanks, the k looks alot better but it definitely doesn't show in those pics. I'll post more soon

 

Error: Loving the simple letter on the green box, nice drips, is that blek GK?

 

tazr- i like that white one keep it up.
error- nice , i like the one on the orange box,

 

modes no need to get arsey
i was just pointin it out.

 

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I've had very disappointing tags lately, I am using shit paint and stock caps but still I gotta quit fuckin them up this bad.

 

Im pretty new to graff but heres my tag
crit plz

 

HANDSTYLE BATTLE!

WORD: PINEAPPLE EXPRESS
DUE DATE: SUNDAY, MARCH 1ST

- send your entries to me (klic)

cesure - simpler homie, looks too forced

rype - stick to paper for now

tasr - nice stuff, second one looks best

resk - haha yea, i think you need to take your own advice like tier said

scrap - looks fresh, seems like youve been getting up alot lately, keep all your letters the same size

watsr - lose the add ons, not a great name to begin with no offence

azule - top ones probably best

oct - nice ink, to many attachments

edit: some old shit for talking

crits...

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thinking of changing my name to sanek, what do you guys think?

 

Here are my tags
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any advice on the letters? cursive ones just for sprayin

 

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Practiced a little bit today to try to get down my letters more.
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klic- I like the second one a lot, maybe if it wasn't as sloppy after the h it would look better but none the less it's still fresh. sanek looks like it could flow nicely, try it out and post flicks after you get the hang of writing it so that we can give you crits to help you decide.

 

bump for crits

 

Does it say coast? What is after the t?

 

Tassa: loose the quotation marks and make the bar in the "A" a bit straighter

 

alright thanks rype, ill do that... that looks a lot better than the one on the electrical box or whatever, id try a lowercase e if i were you though, and it might look better if your Y wasnt bent (so it just looks like "y")

 

Thanks man, I will try out the lower case e, I figured the curved y flowed a little better because its a pretty curvy style but I will try out different shit to try to see how it looks straight.

 

question for you Klic, why is it a bad name to begin with?

just wondering

 

in my opinion, it doesnt sound that great to say, the letters arnt very good, i dont really like how theirs 3 consanants in a row at the end there.. but its up to you, if you like it i dont see any reason why you should stop writing it

 

I get what your saying but i think im going to stick with it till i can come up with something better

 

bump for crit

 

here is what i came up with today
(i know loose the add-ons)