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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
heres some of my tags...crits
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Erroroner- I like it
Earn- I like the second one alot more, mostly cause I dont like the underline
I need some serious help haha I feel like my letters just cant flow together well at all in a hand style.
I'm fuckin no one so... what do I know, but people say crits for crits so heres the shiz, cause I just need to know what direction to push in
Fobia - I'd say more simple, I hate using a pencil, pens and markers are just a different feel, imo
tru - damn, simples...
emik - I'd change the e, but thats just me, otherwise.. at my level i dont think i can crit this much
earn - the first one is a no, the second is better. that first one, i see what you wanted to do, but...
lame - i get it with the line, but I dont think it worked like you were hopin
nukes - i like that, it's not bad, i dont think i can really crit this at my level past that
error - or this, but i think this looks good
idk... some of this is a little older. at this point i dont if i should just be looking at other styles to just get the movements or what. i just sit around and draw pages and pages of letters. i do differeent words all the time to get a well rounded alphabet. theres no other people here though so i just want some other perspective.
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lickle somting i and i whipped up for dah boy proper
wucha know rudeboy?
used my new mini mop with black grog, I shal post pics when I get my phone back from my buds house
I need to try some grog. How is it?
practice dude...i think your tryng to hard..go simpler
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oh shit that tag right there looks like some kinda nyc style or somethin lol
yo, someone already writes faim...as seen in this video about around 2 minutes in
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i would have to agree - philly handstyles should stay in philly
mone-i like it.
with ease-go simpler and get some flow going
las-its ok.. but the drips are kind of shitty
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Very new to this. Any crit is appreciated.
SOME NEW SHIT
Basik: Don't squish your letters so much
Oxi: You are improving very quickly
Mone: Maybe add some dots near the end and make all the lines in your asteriks the same lenght
cust-lol.wtf is cust??? dope tho
basik-go more basikererer.
VDK...all fuckin day.
This whole page looks pretty good, sorry i had to ruin it
so dont bump that shit
Thanks for the crit. I am not sure how to make it more simple though, like it would just looks like normal printing when I try to make it simpler. It does look good spaced out a bit more, thanks.
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