Any reason?

or just because?

Also,
I'm done with it,
should I send it to you, sir?

 

I'm quite high that's why

and yeah just send it ill try to put it up tommorow

 

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janek-looks good and simp...
zise-change da E

 

uhmm. crits please

 

Knive i like it, but your "e" is a little strange/big
Zise i would keep the first one


is this better? crits pls

 

ur u looks like a y and u only have one " and a star... i like the colorful y tho =]

 

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSCF0142.jpg

nevermind the2 letter

look at the hand next to it.

CRITS:

Knive: make them all even / on the same anlge

Janek: All i can say is that you've improved a shit load, make that hand a 1liner now.

Zise: Loose the squigly lines, more keyboard-ish letter.

 

I like your Cust shit more, man

 

Orly?

I'm still fucking proud of my tazr hand, it was one of my biggest accomplishments in graff, tasr wise.

 

dunsy - your s looks like a 5. practice that. looking nice otherwise, although the D underline is iffy.
kn1ve - i like it. what kind of marker you using?
shurik - that shit is weak. i would say work on each letter indivually, starting simple so all of them are the same size style etc and then work some kind of style after you have that down.

wares

crits plz

 

meh, remindds me of janeks hand

 

Yeah, the W looks like a J.

 

hey guyz...I am a rookie at taggin and I hope u can gimme some advice... I've also included some of my work so far..

 

nice stuff, lose the crown.

 

buff got tired real quick

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went overboard with the lines in the O's

wares- definitely work on making that w, look like a w

 

thanks for the crits
wallace - dope. like the flares. whats going on with that half finished hollow throw?
killerspeen - weak. lose the arrows on the letters, the quotes, and all those extentions. try getting your hand to flow through more simple letters before trying to make it all crazy and shit. just looks toy and over styled.


any better?

 

it would look better without all that extra shit on your s, and dont extend the bottom of your w as far

 

I just started doin graffiti and this is my tag i had to use pen, didnt have a marker!!
criticize and give me suggestions!


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that looks horrible, start with the simplest letters you can do and we'll help you from there