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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
I think joker is mocking our board
what about this, it was my first ever throw up
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im a part time troll....did i mention that?
DUNSY - Your 'u' does resemble a y. I don't like the star, replace it with a quotation. Otherwise I dig
skull-e Kinda messy, not sure what it says lol.
hardwares - The extension on the 's' looks kind of weird. Otherwise i like it.
Wallace- nice flares.
joker - not really. like klic said, i think you should start simpler.
exitus - i like the bottom one the best.
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Crit please, started graffin two weeks ago. (starve)
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post crits when you post your pics. common knowledge.
aerosoloholic- that shit looks weak and rushed. lose all the arrows and curly extensions and spend some time on your letters. make it readable
thedudeman -i like it. alot. although the tag on your first post (bottom left corner) could use some work.
starve -for a two week start thats not half bad. just make your letters not look as generic toy letters, fuck around with them until you like it. take inspiration from other tags. blah blah blah
aerosoloholic - not really liking it either. start simpler.
thedudeman - the top picture is wack, but the other one is dope. work on your letter 't' and 'r'.
Hey where's my crit? lol just playin.
i just wanted a page of tags
i think his R's are dope. personal preference i guess.
thanks for the crits guys sorry i didnt crit anybody else im just not that good at it.. my only advice to evryone is to just keep trying and dont give it up.. everyone has potential to be great if theyre willing to open up their minds to new things...
starve: i think if u lose the tail on the r...or make it a bit smaller it may be better
Thanks for the crits guys. I tweaked my tag up a tiny bit, added an exclamation mark. i dunno if this is any better though.
They're both pretty much the same thing, but yeah.
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thats pretty bad i didnt see your last one but mayb u should just write simples
Also, when you are using a calig. marker,
It normally looks better when you write with it like __ instead of |
I get what you're sayin. So it looks better when I write with the fat side of the nib or the skinny side? Cause I'm kinda using a highlighter for my tags on paper lol.
starve you gotta give your letters room to breathe...that was some of the best advice i got when i first started. go simp, and progress...
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