trying a new philly style i lik it crits^^^^


new one liners i like

 

woonybomber- the 1st tag on the bottom pic is sick i fuckin love it
tha- the first one i like more the a is pretty cool but the h looks a little too generic

 

This whole page sucks. Don't get too ahead of yourself kids. Woony, second tag on the bottom is not a oneliner. And all of your others suck.

Tha, that is all way too generic. It's hard to rock a three letter name, especially for me. But you need style. Keep your T straight for now, and keep your letters the same size.

 

a few tags

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i think that color would look better on a dark wall... use black for walls that color if ur just doin tags... and woony i like the one on the bottom left... Tha isnt a good name, i liked theta better

 

Bump for critique please

 

........all but the first one are from the top of my head

 

thanks for the crits guys
gunna try a few H's and put the E back in. still don't want that second T, it just troughs the weighting off.

Vonek - I like 4 the best but 6 is close behind
use the N and K from 6 in 4 (but keep the scale)

 

jek i like it with no underline... looks like u can do it the exact same way a bunch of times so just keep it in ur arsenal and come up with new ones...

vonek i kind of like 6 but with the N from 1... i can see that name being easy for a one-liner tag just because of where each letter begins and ends

 

lick my ballz fuck face

 

****** you dont go balls to lick. Eat shit and choke. Everything you do is wack. Youre like a fucking toy-r-us.

 

ayyy fuck you buddy you stay the fuck out of this you fucking troll ***** i will shit on you with mi eyes closed you fucking dirty jew and i dont have balls hahaha thats funny kus your girl seems to think otherwise



fucking jew bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

 

i made these fo Th3t4 and Zook

 

more tagzzzz, help meh

 

yeo mang that face is dope and the first on is stright

 

thanks man.....its one of my classic characters that i save in ma pocket

 

Vonek - #3 flows very well. keep doing shit like that. the other v's are lackin, and nonflowy

 

Where is this at?

 

stot - i dont think you should do your T's like that. I think two t's in one name is pretty hard to do. you could jus tmake em larger and capital and maybe put a line across the top, but what your doing now is okay, but instead of having both t's have the little line that goes down, just do it on the first t and have the line go through the other T.

i hope that made sense