You're trying way to hard and its ending up looking ugly, just start with simples and work youre way up anyways whats better, this.. [Broken External Image]:http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/1559/task.jpg or this [Broken External Image]:http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7495/tasktagpe.jpg
I like the TOAST a lot actually. Just those letters though. Task, use a shorter top bar for the T and make the top part of the K look more like a keyboard K. And Nose, I can't sea it, sorry.
tried to simple it a little [Broken External Image]:http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/6035/wwwaa.jpg
Well if your just sketching at the moment then you could go to an art store or maybe even staples or something and get some chisel tips. Some art stores even sell paint markers.