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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
what the fuck, sierra nevada is delicious!
Blackto- You seem to have a nice cap, but you're definitely not using it to its potential. No flow to either of those hands and the circle is just awful. Keep at it. There is some decent parts of those hands, but overall, just poorly executed.
Ibu- I love your hands, but I'm having trouble with this one. It might just be the flick of it. Don't know how to crit it, though.
V3da- there just seems to be very little form in your letters. I'm guessing it says Arzo, but it looks like A32O. Work.On.Structure.
I'm trying to learn some of my hands backwards. First attempt
those are nice nouv....
and it was my first time having a pale ale.... its an acquired taste! haha
i like the top the most nouv
First post, first drawing in like 12 years, first attempt at anything like this. Wasnt feeling the white outline or the backround, but it is there so whatever. Just a quick 2 minute thing, red sharpie and a Pilot G-2 07. LMK what you guys think.
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looks like you did a handstyle and then thickened it...and threw on a glow..not really a handtyle imo
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No thickening, there was just enough overlap between the letters to make it appear that way. did a quick draw with the red, then followed it one more time to make sure the color was even, followed with the black outline on the edge, then shadow.
What would you consider it to be? one guy on here said it looked more like a tag.
I know my opinion doesnt mean shit, but I like these. I think if you could match the W and I from the first with the S and the E from the 2nd, it'd be gold.
nose your picture is bigger finally.. dope R in that tag
Sorry krutch, but wise's aren,t that good. you need to work on basic letters more, and don't do your i like that
No problem Sbal. I figured I would just comment on that specific image he posted
Nose, you really shouldn't be focusing on one-liners right now. Get your letters down clean, first.
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Ehh i know its different colors but i thought it looked good personally.
Safe, id lose the big circle and the little halo on top, sometimes simpler is better y'know?
Arzo, try keeping all the letters the same size, and less slanted. start slanting the letters after youve gotten comfortable with the straight ones.
just some quick stuff, let me know what you think. been writing about a month. sorry about cellphone quality.
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How do I develop basic letters though? Is my tag just supposed to look like WISE at first?
ya man regular print letters. its like how are you how are gunna do a backflip if you dont know how to jump. when learning anything in life, you gotta start basic and boring i hate to say it but its true
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