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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
yea i get where your comming from to just thought id put my two cents in lol
KNO - Try to put a little bit of space between the N and the O and remove the face.
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go wayyy simpler my friend
How could I simplify it? I don't know what it simpler than that, other than maybe the E could be simplified?
Don't do that with the G. You know what I mean. That left bar on the H is ridiculously small. A big curve on the R there doesn't work if it's not at the end of the name. Basically youre trying too hard. Do this: PHIGURE. And consider a shorter name.
Word son, keyboard letters till you get familiar with your shit then add your own taste to it... slowly.
Phigure is a dope name but Gyse is right its a bit long especially for a toy
EDIT: I submitted that picture before I read your post. I'll start working on keyboard letters. =] Should I continue with Phigure, trash it, or work on other stuff along side with Phigure?
I re-did Phigure, and also added Phalse (I royally fucked up the L) and Phound, but those last two seem rather generic. As for length, it has been an issue for me. I enjoy Phigure though, but I know that better tag > preferred name. I've wanted to use Phade, cause my initials are PH and it ties in with my actual name well, but I know he is a big name so I'm not going to do that.
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youre trying to make something above your own skill level, when youre starting out just do simple letters and tweak them then keep making changes and develop a style, it takes time.
anyways i thought id post this to get some crits
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here are some new tags I was fucking with
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one more I forgot
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You pick your name. It's fine to work with a few until you get your shit down. It will probably help. Otherwise, follow task2's advice.
Task2- Not a bad start, good and simple. That swirl off the K is a bit excessive, and the K is a little far from the S. You're on the right track, practice.
VVV guy- I can only read 2 of those, Emit and Enzo. Google Emit graff. The Enzo tag is maybe your best one. Make the O bigger, stop doing arrows and trying to have style, and just do keyboard letters for a while.
Yeah I know, like I said I was just trying new words, Emit and enzo and exo are not my tags.
Some stupid ass names you *****s' think of.
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thanks, i appreciate it
edit: nevermind now I know what you meant
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i dont like that arrow off the H but the tag is legit
lol was a level 5 cap
on mtn tar black
Didnt realise that someone who died used Waste, ive just been writing WIL recently anyway.
So I tried a simpler version of Phigure and came up with this. I'm pretty sure the P is too complicated,and the spacing could be a lot better, but other than that is this a good direction?
I wrote a little bit on a page of mostly simples (2nd picture), are any of them a good direction to head towards regarding simplicity and letter structure? I kind of splurged a couple of times a wrote what I wanted, not regarding practice or simplicity or anything, so ignore those. Haha.
The third picture is one I found on my computer a long time ago. It says "Axem". What do you think? Aside from the silly E and the tail of the E being part of the M.
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Separate names with a comma.