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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. RADAWG

    RADAWG Senior Member

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  2. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    your EA could be mistaken as OA with a over extended line in the A. space it out just a tad.
     
  3. Gyse

    Gyse Senior Member

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    What leaks said. try leaning the E back a little, or see how some capital E's look. An underline or something would finish it off, looking good though man.
     
  4. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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    ***** can't even get hated on in here.
     
  5. smokeitup

    smokeitup Elite Member

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  6. Heklr

    Heklr Banned

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    Final 'E' in the 3rd picture is decent. Lose the extra whip that leads to the arrow.

    Other than that, I think you're reckless. There's a place for graffiti, and I don't think a nice wooden bench is the place. Graffiti on walls is expected but tax paying adults are going to get ticked when they try and hop a log. If your hands were amazingly perfect, then OK, let it ride. But you pretty much suck.

    You willing to go to jail for your shitty ass hands, kid?
     
  7. Phat 2

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  8. IbuprofenTablets

    IbuprofenTablets Banned

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  9. NouveauP

    NouveauP Elite Member

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    Ibu, your letters aren't aligned. The HA look like they're standing straight up and the other two are leaning. And the letters just don't have much consistency as far as I can tell. The A and R especially. I've seen 100x doper from you.

    Phat- Looks pretty dope off first glance. Kind of a standard graffiti style done in illustrator. Those wedges are fun to play with. The arrow off of the first A is a little ridiculous. I'd lose the star altogether after the L. I can't tell if I'd like it better with or without the slits out of the letters. But that Q is pretty nasty. I used to rock a similar one. Might just be my stylistic choice, but I'd stand that V straight up. Make it look strong like that H! Not bad though. One of my favorite color combos too.

    DKODE- Your style is a lot different than mine. I don't know if I'd give the best crits. The O looks a little cramped and not as clean as the other letters in a lot of your hands. And I'd just chill out with the add-ons, personally.

    Oh, and FV sucks.
     
  10. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    thanks nouv
    suppose the a and the arrow weren't connected and the arrow started at the 2 slits on. would that make it not ridiculous?

    and I need to put something between the vandal and the hq to separate the 2 words, and just a space isn't cuttin it. why should I lose the star? it looks like it's the center of that semi circle over the letters. and what do u think would look good in its place? a dash for example?
     
  11. NouveauP

    NouveauP Elite Member

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    I personally think the dead space would be fine, but ultimately of course, it's up to you. As the arrow is concerned, I'd just have an underline with the arrowhead (that is, if you decide to keep the arrow. I shy away from them in many cases)
     
  12. CuCCui

    CuCCui Senior Member

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  13. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    of course I can cuccui, actually that was how I made this illustrator file, I traced along to a marker tag I did on a paper
     
  14. IbuprofenTablets

    IbuprofenTablets Banned

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    Ok, battle me?

    The word's: Stump
     
  15. CuCCui

    CuCCui Senior Member

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    how do wanna go at it peice, throw,tag... paint, marker,mop? if it's outside and not on paper ,hottest spot takes it!!!
     
  16. fyskl

    fyskl Senior Member

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    it looks like u need to go a little slower judging by streaks u have in some parts...but i like the middle red one the best..also like how the flow of the top of the R and S on the bottom red tag go
     
  17. Sbal

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    Is that a Dalo?
     
  18. HeklrToo

    HeklrToo Senior Member

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    He ain't gonna' paint battle you dude...

    There's a select few cats on here that paint regularly. The percentage of those willing to waste paint on a battle piece are even fewer.
     
  19. IbuprofenTablets

    IbuprofenTablets Banned

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    Hahahahaha.

    Ask to be banned from websites, then appear there again 3 days later more.

    Also, Pretend to be other people defending yourself on the internet more.
     
  20. ReSeM

    ReSeM Senior Member

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    lol are you retarded? Apparently he said he wanted a TAG battle since he did kinda post it in the TAG thread after you insulted his TAG.
    fucking toys...