make the loops a cock ring

 

I can't draw dicks.

 

Never seen one or what?

 

i just want some feedbacks please.

 

Can I get some criticism on my shit? I'm looking for criticism more so on the tag itself, I know my lines are whack and the halo and the arrow pointing down is retarded,but just the overall style of the tag, what do you like? what would you do to it? Or is it hopeless and I should swap lmk thanks

 

I always felt gay drawing dicks. I've only seen one. How many have you been looking at bud?

 

Lets stop dickin around and give some creative criticisms people.
Panic978: Looks great, cept the end could use a little tweaking to keep your flow going.
Kroe: The top and bottom Look premium, on the middle the P looks like an R but the actual R looks sick.

 

Hobel- i would just say work on the e on the bottom one and bring the l a little closer

 

thanks Doper!

 

when you're in highschool gym, the army, play sports, and go to the gym as an adult you see them. Not like i'm trying, but they are usually just hanging out in these locations. Typically them making you that uncomfortable is an indication of a deeper issue.

 

thanks fyskl any other advices/comment would be appreciate. thanks

 

Ya homie looks tight, that s on the end is kinda wack tho

 

thanks its actually a C the down arrow makes it look like an S but I got rid of that real quick this was actually the second tag I ever sprayed

 

Sey still has one of the best hands i've seen.

 

x

 

yeah each to their own...

 

where my crits at?

 

your E looks like an S. You need to write a little bigger. Go a little more simple until your flow develops a bit more. If your tag looks good in pen it will probably look good in marker. Do a simple tag. Then fill a few dozen pages in just tags then ask for crits then.