the s doesn't go with the rest of the letters, try and strech it down and lose the little swiggly thing on the m too. besides that not to bad, i mean it is the toy forum, but try using a chisel tip, it'll look a thousand times better
As in it's not much to work with? [/b][/quote] The letters are good. I just couldn't really get a flow to them in that particular order, and I'm not great with a "G"
Damn your "X" Amaz!!!! Damn it straight to hell!!! [Broken External Image]:http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00561144f00000027.jpg I'll try later when I calm downand am no longer suicidal.... I hate X's....
[Broken External Image]:http://img452.imageshack.us/img452/7421/zent19gm.jpg I suck at tags, could use some help and Critz plz..... ***** Bored as fuck so might as well ad this i just did..... [Broken External Image]:http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/4640/zenttagz4ib.jpg
Zent- On that first pic, how'd you get yer tag that color? Is it reverse polarity or some shit? Your first pic is deffinately better than your second. I wou'd scrap that new T. On the Z- That little extension on the top sways unnaturally to the left. Try it swaying to the right and see if you like it more. The E is nice. The N is a little loosy goosy. The letter T can actually have alot of style if you play with it. I used to have a hard time with T also. I wouldn't rest the bottom of every letter directly on the Z. You lose a bit of flow with the entire bottom being straight in line. Just my oppinion. Take it or leave it. Keep up the good work. Rome- Except for the M, the letter's aren't too bad. Just the shape that the whole tag molds into, I'm not digging that so much. ( it kinda shaped like a round blob overall.)Try going small to large or large to small and see if anything happens.
ill try that out, thx man for the help *** the tag is silver, and is marker paint, its the green on my shirt that made it go that flourecent turquoise when i took the pic
its a sharpie, oil paint, bout medium size, discount on them at this store so i bought a few, couldnt rack any though they were watching me like a hawk... **** my shirt made the silver look that colour and its totaly bitchin, if only it exicited......
two new tags, like em both but that is probly a bad sign lol... i took you advice and i agree the extension on the z looks better going to the right, tightened up the n, and tried some style in that t..... think it flows alright, but you cant crit your own work lol here they are [Broken External Image]:http://img333.imageshack.us/img333/4301/zent23vl.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img475.imageshack.us/img475/7338/zent35qe.jpg