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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    #2 looks ok. Work on that one.
     
  2. Relzer

    Relzer Senior Member

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    Yo, what's up??
    Give me all the crits so I can adjust and get some flavor.
     

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  3. hungover

    hungover Elite Member

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    The "Z" is a little out of place, kind of messes up the flow. also the R at the end could flare a bit more
     
  4. Relzer

    Relzer Senior Member

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    How could I improve it? I can flare the R a little more but that L & Z
     
  5. BAITS

    BAITS Moderator

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    try mess around with making those e's capitals
    flair out that R too. just general loosen up, do some random shit. try get a nice solid flow going on paper, maybe listen to some music while doing it. i find that generally helps change things up, or at least make things more comfortable
     
  6. Relzer

    Relzer Senior Member

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    I will try that out.
     
  7. Relzer

    Relzer Senior Member

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    Trying new letters. Crits
     

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  8. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Not feeling these^^^. I think your first pics looked better.
     
  9. hungover

    hungover Elite Member

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    maybe you can get some inspo from these. not a fan of your letter flow but w/e
     

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  10. Relzer

    Relzer Senior Member

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    Really like the bottom left. Should I go a little simpler with the letters? Idk how long you've been writing I'm just trying to get a flavorful style.
     
  11. Abesk

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  12. Abesk

    Abesk Senior Member

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    that RO combo on the second post is heat, your style is developing for sure
     
  13. Tomman22

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  14. hungover

    hungover Elite Member

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  15. Relzer

    Relzer Senior Member

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    Hmm.. name change.
     

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  16. Benskioner

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  17. Abesk

    Abesk Senior Member

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    Damn, the new forum is taking some getting used to for me. What's y'alls experience with it so far?

    @hungover preciate it man

    @Relzer not too bad, but honestly that sharp style is hard to master. Good luck.

    @Benskioner with all the varying letter sizes and centerlines it makes it hella hard to read all that. I would also lose the drip looking things personally.
     
  18. Relzer

    Relzer Senior Member

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    Is BZRK a known writer I feel like I have a nasty tag for that name.
     
  19. Kaps2

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    Testing out serz as a tag. 20171012_233515.jpg 20171012_233313.jpg
     
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  20. Unk

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