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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
I'm a have to say no. Looks way to toyish with all that extra stuff.
@skrit get rid of all those extensions, drop the halo and the quotation marks.
Pretty good homie. I like how the top one's R goes into the O. Only suggestions I got would be to make the M a little bigger and sharper. Also, the T looks too much like an A.
After crits xo
Crits on this? Tried a different style.
use lower case e's because it will fill more space like how the upper case R's do. they have similar looks so it will appear nicer.
Just messing around a new style/name
Not really feeling the swoopy things.
Does it say Shim or Shin?
hahaha supposed to say swim
Ok, I see it.
Check out my shit and lemme know what could be done differently. Honest critisism is appreciated ✌
Crits on this?
@Empire 1. This is tags post something like that in blackbooks 2. I think you should go simpler on letter structure.
Idk about this. Idk what your tags look like but you should read the rules of these forums before you start posting shit in the wrong forum, from what i see im sure your tag is booty. You should write and practice your tags before you move to more advanced peices but thats just me. You could learn it ass backwards or start with tags and throws.
Yo Empire, if you don't know the difference between a tag and a piece just go into this with the attitude of being your own worst critic. Essentially that you know you suck, but you're trying to throw it at people anyway to find out "how" and "why" you suck. In order to suck slightly less till a year from now you start feeling semi neutral but still trying to find a new par for course.
Is that Plato or Plaso can't tell from the throw up or the tag. Sorry . I'd say straighten up the p.
Work on that S, make it more legible. That L lools like a 2. Keep at it.
I believe it says Plato. Don't do your letters so swoopy. Make them simpler.
Separate names with a comma.