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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    I'm a have to say no. Looks way to toyish with all that extra stuff.
     
  2. xXSTASOXx

    xXSTASOXx Senior Member

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    Metro crits?
    @skrit get rid of all those extensions, drop the halo and the quotation marks.

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  3. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Pretty good homie. I like how the top one's R goes into the O. Only suggestions I got would be to make the M a little bigger and sharper. Also, the T looks too much like an A.
     
  4. Preach Acid

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    After crits xo
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  5. skrit.

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    IMG_5222.JPG Crits on this? Tried a different style.
     
  6. Relzer

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  7. nastynasty

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  8. pore

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    Just messing around a new style/name

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  9. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Not really feeling the swoopy things.
     
  10. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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  11. pore

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    hahaha supposed to say swim
     
  12. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Ok, I see it.
     
  13. Empire

    Empire New Member

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    Check out my shit and lemme know what could be done differently. Honest critisism is appreciated ✌
     
  14. Empire

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  15. skrit.

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    Crits on this? IMG_5231.JPG @Empire 1. This is tags post something like that in blackbooks 2. I think you should go simpler on letter structure.
     
  16. xXSTASOXx

    xXSTASOXx Senior Member

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    Idk about this. Idk what your tags look like but you should read the rules of these forums before you start posting shit in the wrong forum, from what i see im sure your tag is booty. You should write and practice your tags before you move to more advanced peices but thats just me. You could learn it ass backwards or start with tags and throws.
     
  17. GuardDog

    GuardDog Senior Member

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    Crits?
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    Yo Empire, if you don't know the difference between a tag and a piece just go into this with the attitude of being your own worst critic. Essentially that you know you suck, but you're trying to throw it at people anyway to find out "how" and "why" you suck. In order to suck slightly less till a year from now you start feeling semi neutral but still trying to find a new par for course.
     
  18. skrit.

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    Is that Plato or Plaso can't tell from the throw up or the tag. Sorry . I'd say straighten up the p.
     
  19. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Work on that S, make it more legible. That L lools like a 2. Keep at it.
     
  20. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    I believe it says Plato. Don't do your letters so swoopy. Make them simpler.