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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Nice flow. I like the Y.
     
  2. GuardDog

    GuardDog Senior Member

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    Working on those traditional styles with a note pad late, crits?

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  3. skrit.

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    I'd say from what I can see just go simpler and drop the halo. Maybe try do small tags so you and a page with like 10 then post 10 in one photo. Maybe try writing at different speeds.
     
  4. skrit.

    skrit. Senior Member

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    IMG_5278.JPG I know it's annoying to here. But I'm talking like this simple. All the curves and flicks aren't working. The problem is the tight corners and stuff. It's not really flowing. I'm still not great but I feel like I'm getting the basics. Just keep working on it.
     
  5. pore

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    thanks boss
     
  6. GuardDog

    GuardDog Senior Member

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    Check these out and tell me what you think bro, I'm all for trying to master the basics I just get bored with it sometimes and fly back into trying shit I can't rock

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    Crits?
     
  7. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Simple and basic. Don't curve your P like you did on the left side. Try leaning your letters to one side, might look good.
     
  8. GuardDog

    GuardDog Senior Member

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    How about this?
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  9. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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  10. GuardDog

    GuardDog Senior Member

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    This is a writing exercise correct?

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  11. GuardDog

    GuardDog Senior Member

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    So by leaning it forward and back it forces my hand to retain some memory of what those angles look like in certain letters, like the A for example being both. If I should go back to doing a straight tag simply by leaning it around my hand doesn't shy away from particular motions like it would if I only got comfy doing a tag one way.

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    Actually by doing this the bottom right tag is the best basic I put out. Thanks guys I really appreciate the help, I'm going to do this a shit ton.
     
  12. skrit.

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    I can see improvement. Keep working on it.
     
  13. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Definitely improving. Keep at it.
     
  14. ESONE.

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  15. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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  16. ESONE.

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    you got it
     
  17. hungover

    hungover Elite Member

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    just some quick hands for ya
     
  18. nastynasty

    nastynasty Senior Member

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    :(
     
  19. Nowc

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    back at it again with a new name after a long break. honest crits please.

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  20. skrit.

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    I like that it's got a nice flow. Honestly I think there's not a lot to crit on. Maybe the tiny bit on the right of A, on the second one down in the middle pokes out (that's trying to find A problem) But like I think try experimenting with other styles.