[QUOTE = "Tempo718, post: 1915801, membro: 55172"] Scusa di spazio ridotto [ATTACH = full] 653.860 [/ attach] [ATTACH = full] 653.861 [/ attach] [/ QUOTE] scusate but the Yellow is not visible over the White wall
Skrit: Letters dont flow that well as a whole tag, together. Try simpler letters and simple flow. And what the guy above said about letter spacing. And Tempo 718 Cant even see what that says
[QUOTE = "Ijustwantyoulifeline, post: 1915811, membro: 125425"] [ATTACH = pieno] 653864 [/ ATTACH] [ATTACH = full] 653.865 [/ attach] [/ QUOTE] SCUSA, MA NON READ IT ... TOO STYLE FEW UNDERSTAND
These right here are ok. They got more flow then all the others. Think of the flow of the word. This is definitely a hard letter combo.
The problem with your tag is 1. the G and first E have equal lines, but the third e is doing it's own thing. 2. G is more slanted than the other letters. 3. K is ridiculously taller than the others when it should be the same height. 4. Until you understand how to compliment something like this and balance it out with the rest of a tag you shouldn't use it. It's just an eyesore right now. The green lines represent the balanced parts of the tag, the elements that make it look good. The green dots show the equal space in the letters, also adding to the balance. The pink shows how you can do both e's and one leg of the K in a single stroke, allowing for faster tags.
Blue lines represent how the letters are all on a baseline, in equal size. The S protrudes equally, but I meant for the top to be equal with the rest of the letters. Red lines show how the tag is balanced and flows properly. Yellow lines show the same, but for horizontal lines. They are angled diagonally and the S doesn't stick out beneath it. I made a mistake making the line diagonal, you should have it flow straight across when you write it. So to get the S to work, it should follow the same pattern as the letters before it, shown below in the yellow lines.