Drop the arrows and the underlining and make the letters a bit more straight and don't worry about styles for now. if you're barely starting out, It's better to have a clean simple tag then having a sorry attempt at something you cant do yet.
The letters are dope and have old school style but the arrows and quotations are extra toy. Go simple wit it.
That looks like a Magnum marker... I suggest you take a few deep wiffs of that thing and then try again
Okay, I'll do that, but I wanted to know if the style of the tag is good and what I should improve on the writing itself. Thank you though for the advice
I suggest you practice writing it bigger so you can stretch out a bit and work on the flow and the style. It looks kinda bunched up. You could also work toward making it as symmetrical as possible that always helps make it look good. You could work on that bottom up connection from the E to the S..it might help to find other people who use the same gimmick and see how they did it. Other than that is looks like a good start.
Good to see some cans. I'd say the f looks like an 8 so shorten the curls. Don't connect the u and n like that. But basically keep practicing
First off is that kingspray VR? Secondly listen to skrit when I first read it the way you loop the f back around caused me to read "sun" at first glance.
Fake cans Was done in the game "Kingspray Graffiti VR" but will do, I use a couple different F's but I'll keep that in mind. I've never been able to figure out how to make a nice looking U though so my workaround was to just connect them lmao, looks better than using my current U. I'll work on it though (Here's another screenshot showing off another kinda F i use in my tags, dont mind the excessive flares)
I have to say I actually really like the style; it kind of feels like a classic new york tag all flared out. I have no idea if kingspray equates to the motion of RL flares with managing the distance and angle(also caps) but I would assume for a fact the hand eye coordination in the general motion of things is the same.
Of course it's scripted, when I make a comment here I like to write out everything in advance. I know it might just sound like I described using a forum but you know "script writing" when you see it. Teach me your tricks; magic man.