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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. xXSTASOXx

    xXSTASOXx Senior Member

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  4. Stain

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    I've been practicing bring the letters in tight together. Any other tips mate.

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  5. SUG

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    My personal opinion i wouldnt make them so tall either
     
  6. gumOnShoe

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    stop it with the t's horizontal bar on top of the rest of the tag, that shit is corny.
     
  7. Stain

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    The top of the i?
     
  8. gumOnShoe

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  10. Tuke

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    The T-U connection is too soft for the style, i know

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  11. gumOnShoe

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    the t looks off. instead of leaning it to the left, try standing the whole joint up some more

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  12. SSTRCMPLX

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    digging this one. shooting the end of the R through the O has some real potential i think.
     
  13. SSTRCMPLX

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    This might be a little hard to explain, but I think you should practice writing the word rather than individual letters therein to improve your flow. I rarely practice letters but write random words over and over instead. Over time you get a feel for how the letters "fit" together as you write.

    As is, it feels like you're writing the letters but not the word. Case in point, the S in bottom left has some style potential but doesn't match up at all with the rest of the letters. You're writing "TAIN" sharply, so adjust your S to match that sharpness or write them all in more rounded form.
     
  14. OWINE

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    need to work on my flow cuz the letters leans on different directions..
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  15. Loner.Graff

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    Crits would be much appreciated

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  16. SSTRCMPLX

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    OWINE: Drop the start at the bottom of the O since it makes it look like a P sometimes. If you're going for angular then make your O angular as well, otherwise, make the other letters round like your O.

    LONER: Clean af, legible, nice kerning, and good balance on the L and R shapes. I would just increase the width of the N a bit and fix that D in RBD since it's too angled and not the same size as the rest.
     
  17. TOPIK

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    How come I can't see alot of these photos
     
  18. Loner.Graff

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    Thanks SSTRC, much appreciated.
     
  19. xXSTASOXx

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