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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
really enjoy the simplicity of ur work
I'm currently working on my first tag. I need some criticism what I can do to make it better. I know I need to work on my letter structure/proprtions. The e for example. Please give me some criticism so I can get better.
Stole the back ground pic
couple 1 liners
Trying to improve my tag, any critique
Working on new styles
That’s dope. You on pro create ?
Nah some android shit ibis paint x
Don’t know if this is the right place for this, but I’m working on my tag, any advice or crits would be super helpful!
I know they aren’t the best, looking for any crits?
Definitely developing some really nice style. I would get rid of the arrow on the U though, kind of breaks up the fluidity and flow of the tag.
@mopbucket I like it, keep getting hands up out there. Those drips are fresh
@arzer you're really showing signs of some really nice style here. Not a fan of the extension on the R, kinda breaks the flow. Definitely keep at it and keep experimenting, just don't overdo it and remember your letter structure
@ElbowMacK187 Love both your posts as usual
@bigmerge Cleanest shit I've seen in a while
@Kaps2 on point
@SpawnCamp love the dusty tag
@Dinki_One My only advice is to keep it simple from the beginning, don't overdo it on extensions. Also keep your letters legible, don't overlap them until you have a good understanding of letter structure. Look around on the forums, look at how others have progressed their hands (don't copy obviously). I personally went around in circles for a good year trying to overcomplicate a tag and add more to it, which only left a tag with no structure, mess everywhere and just gross to look at. My best tags are my clean, simple ones.
@Supra475 I like it
I'll try get some of my shit out soon, still getting back into it.
Ayyy good looks my guy
Heres some more recent ones
So something more simple like this? ( went for a name change)
Yeah looking good there
Thanks for the advice man! Really appreciated
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