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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Matt Wrigh

    Matt Wrigh Senior Member

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    Come join the Bi-weekly battle thread. We should have a new word either today or tom.
     
  2. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    The handstyle battle never got voted on . it was running nobody voted it died we need votes in both battle thread
     
  3. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    Fer sure, maybe I'll go pick a word in the toy tag battle an see if it takes off.
    Thats mainly what I want to work on right now; never got a good handstyle goin..

    Any critz on my Mage tag tho ??
     
  4. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    Psilocybe, for the toy tag battle.. which everyone should go partake in!

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  5. invia1

    invia1 New Member

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    first time writing, lmk what i can do for my style “in via” the way in latin

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  6. SpawnCamp

    SpawnCamp Senior Member

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    Got a graffiti VR sim, pretty good for trying stuff out without wasting paint
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  7. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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  8. quickiehand

    quickiehand Senior Member

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    Dont do one liners and lose all the extra stuff. You should stick to a pen and paper for now cuz that looks like dog shit but atleast your second time writing cant be worse than your first.

    Start simple and you'll improve faster.
     
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  9. SUG

    SUG Elite Member

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    Ok then what would be your critiques be on mine?

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  10. ASOHLE

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    @SUG i like that a lot I’d just bring the flick of the R up to the normal meeting point of the bars.

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  11. SUG

    SUG Elite Member

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    Thanks @ASOHLE...I like the top left one off of your practice page
     
  12. ASOHLE

    ASOHLE Member

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    From the front of my new book

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  13. markten

    markten New Member

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    spacing needs work, critz plz pplz

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  14. gumOnShoe

    gumOnShoe Elite Member

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    What's it suppose to say? i can't read it right.
    That's your first problem, legibility,, you're trying to run before you can walk. take the details down some notches. make it as legible as you can.
     
  15. RiVii

    RiVii Member

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    Looking to maybe build off this? Ideas? Threats? Lol

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  16. RiVii

    RiVii Member

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    Maybe something here?

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  17. ARKO

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    Does it say "ERA"?
     
  18. SpawnCamp

    SpawnCamp Senior Member

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    Try different letter shapes, you've used the same E like 60 times. Most of the time the loop on the R extends past your baseline which you don't want and the letter A isn't a crescent moon
     
  19. SUG

    SUG Elite Member

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    Nobody ever gave there opinion on mine.
    ..since were on the topic, I'm ok with it but I feel like it needs more of a slang feel ya know
     
  20. SpawnCamp

    SpawnCamp Senior Member

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    I like it overall, sorry for crappy quality, just used my fingers on the phone editor. but just lines for stroke direction. Biggest thing was that E is too small and leaves some weird gaps and just making sure you carry your baseline throughout and matching elements. I also suck at this so take my advice with a grain of salt.

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