other than that is it good though?

 

really try to work on more on all the letters and never do that a or t work on the r too and work on ur style its like to apart from each other, try to bring them together!

 

bring them together, and ged rid of that retarded anarchy symbol. just have a straightforward A

 

I dont really get the circle on the A an the R could do whith a bit of work, but not to bad

 

hey i was wondering how long you guys hav bin bombing for

 

i haven't been out bombing, getting some paint monday though

 

ive been bombing serisously for about 2 months, but i first picked up a can and invented a tag when i was about 12! ive changed my name since then tho...
yer phish, go for it! ur tag is lookin good

 

ok thanks its my first tag so i was just tryin it out

 

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Any advise/crits

 

get rid of the crown, the bit in the middle of the O, the quote marks, the underlines, and make the leers more rounded

there

 

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ok... everyone ignored it so crits(ignore the a i messed up)

 

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fixed my tag a lil crits?

 

Cheerz for the advice no crown,no quotation marks,no underlines all gone

 

holy shit scanning these pages made me throw up in my mouth a little.

you kids need to work on keeping it simple, focus on the handstyle itself rather than each letter, that just makes it cluttered, make it flow together as one word, after that get it up more and more and itl develope with more style.

btw that pask is a good start at what im talking about.

 

are you actually saying mine isnt completely horrible? :blink:

 

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Any advice, critiques, etc? I mainly want feedback because i plan on sticking with this for a while.

 

make it not so cluttered and make it readable and the drips are stupid way too many(did you do the drips on ms paint? )i like the second a though and dont do qoutes

 

Thanks for the advice bro

 

did you do the drips on ms paint?