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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. seazr

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  2. -testify-

    -testify- Senior Member

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    are the actual letters shit or okay
     
  3. Hot_Pocket

    Hot_Pocket Senior Member

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    Your actual letters are pretty basic right now, but more style will come in time young padawon.....
     
  4. doomsayer

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  5. doan

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  6. Hot_Pocket

    Hot_Pocket Senior Member

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    It looks a lot like you're taking a lot of time on a line, speed up your strokes, because you can see that they're all crooked in some spots.
     
  7. doomsayer

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    The A doesn't fit in cause it's like square and the other letters are curved. Make the P the same size as the rest and make the A curvy it should look better.
     
  8. d_g

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    Your 'D' looks like a 'P' and your 'a' looks like a backwards 'E'.
     
  9. doan

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    true. ill try to curve the A alittle bit and ill make the D look like a D.
     
  10. doomsayer

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    haha i thought ur D was a P
     
  11. doan

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  12. Hot_Pocket

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    So much better, now make 'em same size.
     
  13. doomsayer

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  14. Hot_Pocket

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    I don't really like that extra squiggle over the "U" and "H". And your H looks almost like a "P" or if a passerbyer is stupid, they even may think it's a "B".
     
  15. doan

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    View attachment 225592

    hows that?

    i took your advice on the letter sizes, and i actually used the whole pen (sharpie magnum) instead of just the corner haha.

    ps. this is my last one for awhile. i dont wanna become a post-whore
     
  16. doomsayer

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    yeah man! that nice huge improvement from before, see simple looks alot better, nice job, now u just gotta oput some of ur own style into it, try a few things, dont be afaraid to fail, but man thats looking so much better
     
  17. Nosypainter

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  18. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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    everyone was dissing all that toy shit on the last couple of pages, but to be fair this is the toy forum - if you wana see mint handstyles go check out the gallery or battle forums

    nosypainter - i agree. he should tidy it up, lose the squiggle and the quote marks, and learn how to do an A
     
  19. jonowev

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  20. Truth.

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    hmm i think u shud get the letters all the same size/width and it wud be looking better, u cud put a nice extension on the top of that J too