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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Hot_Pocket

    Hot_Pocket Senior Member

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    Damnit, I think I'm gonna do a few dovers..... I dunno, just practice a bit.

    Can I get some crits on those handie's though?
     
  2. Stail

    Stail Member

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    The smilie face is nice.
     
  3. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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  4. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    i an only make out a W S, the S is nce, unscrunch the W a bit, ad the underline on the lop on is looking prety nice

    use a fatter marker, like a highlighter or someting with a boradtip when ding handstyles, makes it pop more, peace
     
  5. C3ZR ONE

    C3ZR ONE Moderator

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    Bounce- The flick is bad but those are deff. super fresh. I'm envious.
     
  6. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    Wow, cezr is envious of my handies... I have achieved nirvana hahaha

    And Tricks, I did use a highlighter, just not the whole chisel, I just used one side of it for smaller marks... I'll get a better flick next time guys. Thanks
     
  7. DJLotus

    DJLotus Senior Member

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    yeah but... how do i improve? could you do me a handie please? i write dov4 [/b][/quote]
    First, take out the swirls at the bottom. they are all kinda shaky and they don't really flow....
     
  8. in_the_red

    in_the_red Senior Member

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  9. meeksjoobormist

    meeksjoobormist New Member

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    Hey truth, if you have the time please do "Warz". Thx.
     
  10. Quigbert

    Quigbert Senior Member

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    ai53.photobucket.com_albums_g48_quigbertthesixth_deri6.jpg

    I write deri. Criticism?
     
  11. Quigbert

    Quigbert Senior Member

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    Adore your tag is cookin'
     
  12. Quigbert

    Quigbert Senior Member

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    Adore your tag is cookin'
     
  13. AteskOne

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  14. G-Fat

    G-Fat Elite Member

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    thats just cursive, add style
     
  15. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    ummm it's a cursive based style, these were obviously just quick pen sketches that i threw together, and im still workin on it.
     
  16. DJLotus

    DJLotus Senior Member

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    take off the arrow on the left, and the halo..... and unless you are going for it... the letters get unproportionally bigger as you get to the "ns" so either make it all get bigger proportionally or keep it all the same size.
     
  17. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    i was purposly making it all get bigger...that's what i have done with all my past tags but i kinda shyed away from it and now im trying to start again.
     
  18. DJLotus

    DJLotus Senior Member

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    Well then like i said... don't make the first 3 letters Ame and the next 2 NS... it just needs more definition of some sort of growth if that makes any sense =/
     
  19. Sluts_r_us

    Sluts_r_us Elite Member

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    vump for criticism [/b][/quote]
    bump....
     
  20. C3ZR ONE

    C3ZR ONE Moderator

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    Pesk- Nice letters, good flow. The only thing I'd suggest to get it to flow a bit more is to not write it so straight across. curve it or go small to big to give it that extra little bump of attitude. The underline is kind of uninspired too, but the letters are hot and that's the meat and potatoes of it.

    ATESK- that Amens tag is lookin real good too.