id say lose the extensions on the r n n and space yr letter a little closer...
also if yr gonna andgle letters i reckon its better to start with them slanting the asme way...

 

Aeon- a lil hard to read but i like it exspecily the second one.

worked on it a lilttle..... Critz

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Snap, get rid of that curve at the top of the A. And get rid of that little extention on the end of the N.

 

LOVE these

 

try writing you name wicked fast a few times, don't hesitate on letters. at first things can get a little weird doing this, but just try it for an experiment. see what you end up with doing it that way then go back over and look at them. see what you can do to make the letters flow a little better and be more clear or clean.

 

I agree with Glass. Get a piece of lined looseleaf paper. Write you name as fast as you can as many times as possible until you find something you like. And then tweak that into perfection. Take your time and have patience.

 

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snap make ALL the letters the same size

 

Cheers. I kinda like the one without the link from the y to e but yeah, I dunno...

Yours look good but the S in the top one doesn't fit with the rest of the letters. I really like the style of them though.

 

urk make your lowercase r look not so much like an n and make the top one's s fit the style
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yh that style has potentual!

 

eihh, im a toy and ive started to write abaut 2-3 years ago, and ive always had the tag SCOPE,but theres another scope, waht do i do to get his aproval to keep my tag?
il post some shit i did right now
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mine or urks

 

what a waste of good stickers! make letters same width/height and draw on paper.!

 

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The 'F' and first 'e' are nice, the other letters need a little work.

 

REALLY dont start doin a lot of stickers until you hav a good bomb. and dont color in the 'hello' thing it looks so stupid

 

S'cope 2 .. haha anyways...

lose the drips..work on the S...mek the letters the same size...

 

scope u need to start wid block letters and learn the letter stucture