any improvement??

 

bump b/c i fixed the broken link just look at the msx's I like those better

 

its hard to crit on this shit but tahworsetoy i guess your livein by your name. shit just looks like handwriteing to me. keep going. people say keep it simple, well u dont get much more simple then that. time to step up a bit more.

here some so im not flickless.

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Fube-Like i said in my PM, like the 2nd one. Where i got most of my ideas from .

TahWorse-Agree with fube.

Slinks- Try some advice that someone gave me, try writing ur name really fast and if it looks good use it and work on it. Your flick just looks like you sat there and spent 10 minutes writing that. Try speeding it up abit more and make them flow together more.

Whoare- that looks pretty kool on that door.

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Something I was tryin today at school

 

I agree with smoek 1, it does look like you took your time with it. A tag is to quick. but besides that it looks great...just change the bottom of the L cuz it looks lika an H...and try squishing the letters up a bit.

 

ok I'm trying to figure out waht name I want so here are a few ive been messing around with....

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water1, merk(1)

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enro1, enzo, water1(again), cham 1

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mac dre sticker, enzo

any feed back will be greatly appreciated...

 

my friend writes merk one and he kills that shit
just sayin

 

I usually write merk with no one...what city?

 

heres mine

 

^^^^is it me or does that say PuffPuffPass?....Please tell me that's not your tag name. I don't even know what to say about that.....

 

i think it does because the one at the bottom says toke......

 

some lil hanstyles, need to work on em
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that c looks bare like Cope2's

 

Cham- Im likin the ENRO and ENZO tgas the best out of all, they're a step above everything else. def like the stickie for ENZO, got a nice eazy thorie down for that name too.

DLove- I like the middle one best.

 

yep that what it says , it my tag cuz ppl where i live are weed h8trz !~

 

thanks for the feed back, I was leaning toward enzo also. Ill prolly stick with that for the time being. but thank you for your feedback

 

Shouldnt be criting you 2 because you didnt take the time to crit anyone else. But since theres nothing else to crit

DLove- First ones the best, Easiest to read and cleanest. On the second one dont crowd a bunch of junk around your letters that doesnt fit in. Dont just add things on just because you feel like it and if they dont look good.

zander- Get a new name...other than that the style isnt bad just trying giving your letter abit more room so they arent so squished together



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Post this again since no crits last time...

New style i was trying.

 

zendar im loven that style, but seriously man that name, what are you thinking?
anyways heres mine, crits?

 

nice D