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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    really feeling this trash...simple, legible letters...yet still amazing style to them. loving that "h".

    also mad props to eater(good flow),
    zono-one,
    and hawker.
    really feeling yours hawker. the "w" is awsome and the "e" made me cream myself...several times.
     
  2. PopwarSkater

    PopwarSkater Member

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  3. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    popwar skater - give crits, but im going to give you some anyway, take those two lines off the edge of the K and change the e and work on the whole thing, it doesnt flow.
    zono - yours is flowing alot i like it
     
  4. role

    role Senior Member

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    try writing that shit with a pen, you're obviously not very good at keeping the marker steady and getting the same witdh goin the whole letter

    also try some shit with reworking your letters to where your pen doesnt leave the paper until the letter is done, doing letters in seperate pieces is generally treacherous
     
  5. RollTRS

    RollTRS Senior Member

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    Bump
     
  6. SCOPE2

    SCOPE2 Senior Member

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  9. PopwarSkater

    PopwarSkater Member

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    That's cool, I like it. It flows nicely and looks kind of heart-shaped.


    Oh and Scope 2, kinda hard to see from the pick, but defiantly lost that arrow to the left.
     
  10. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    bump for critz
     
  11. Blak-T

    Blak-T Senior Member

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  12. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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  13. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    give crits before asking for them to edward and black t
     
  14. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    :blink:
    you can't really crit handies.
    everybody got they own style.
     
  15. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    you can't really crit handies.
    everybody got they own style. [/b][/quote]
    Yes you can.
     
  16. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    :blink:
    you can't really crit handies.
    everybody got they own style. [/b][/quote]
    Yes you can. [/b][/quote]
    beat me to it. thanks and if you couldnt then why would over half the site have "give crits before asking for them" in their sig?
     
  17. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    :blink:
    you can't really crit handies.
    everybody got they own style. [/b][/quote]
    Yes you can. [/b][/quote]
    ok. :)
    ummm
    lemme see
    blak t- dont underline everything.
    darkeist- make your letters smaller and not overlapping eachother.
    krk- lose the random arrow and crown looking thing.
    is that better ladies?
     
  18. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    barely anything is over lapping and i just zoomed in on the tag so it looks big
     
  19. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    whats it say
    ill write it for you
    and give you an example.
     
  20. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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