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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    code- shorten the tail on the e just a little. not much to crit man, it looks good. now go and develop a new tag.
     
  2. SCOPE2

    SCOPE2 Senior Member

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    emerge wants an exchange
     
  3. PopwarSkater

    PopwarSkater Member

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    Hoolllyy shit man. I want that fucking R. I can't get mine that good, mine look sort of similar but yours really flows. Shit, and I'm really feeling the captial E. Shit is awesome.
     
  4. PopwarSkater

    PopwarSkater Member

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    All right, I've given out a few crits now without posting anything. So here, crit this please. I've been expirementing with using a new more "blockish" style, instead of the usually flowy curve one. [The black dots mean it is the old style. No black dot means newer style]


    [Broken External Image]:http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r108/PopwarSkater143/newstyle.jpg

    (Sorry for the bad quality, I think the marker is dying.)
     
  5. kozmoe

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  6. stado

    stado Senior Member

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    i would change the K, and make the $ a normal S. also try to keep the Z just as big as the other letters.

    [Broken External Image]:http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7803/hpim0747to7.jpg
    not mine, but what do you think? (don't be to harsh, this boy doesn't like crits) :lol:
     
  7. stado

    stado Senior Member

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  8. zono-one

    zono-one Senior Member

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    kozmoe .... i dont really like it and i think you should not have the line in the s ... but its not that bad...

    and for ur mate sane ^^^ ... not that bad but dont have the arrows
     
  9. -Craz-

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  10. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    to stado - not that bad but as others said get rid of the arrows
    kosmo - loose the dolar sign and make the z the same size as other letters i guess

    ai169.photobucket.com_albums_u201_Siekt_seikthandyagain.jpg
     
  11. Doza

    Doza Member

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    I like all the ones on the second page.
     
  12. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    we arent talking about the second page were talking about ppage 715, this one
     
  13. Doza

    Doza Member

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    NO im talkin bout craz I like the second page of his stuff.
     
  14. Doza

    Doza Member

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    You know, the second pic
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  15. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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  16. Doza

    Doza Member

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  17. nase7

    nase7 Senior Member

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    ok for one dude the fucking j looks like shit it looks like a backwards c and i was just trying to give you some advice to help you out but hey if your going to be a cunt about it fuck you.... [/b][/quote]
    Jroc if i was you i wouldnt be all mouthy with someone trying to help u because to be honest if i didnt know ur username i wudnt have a clue wat that says. just start off ur tag with normal flowing handritin and develop it from there because im not guna lie to you mate thats fugly.


    EDIT: my tag i done with a sharpie magnum
    [Broken External Image]:http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9681/dsc00376vq7.th.jpg
    crits please ;) .
     
  18. Doza

    Doza Member

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    NIce but, sharpies cmon man get some dalos or somethin.
     
  19. PopwarSkater

    PopwarSkater Member

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    Can someone post an example of a tag with good and bad flow? I'm not reallu sure on how to get mine to flow better....
     
  20. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    thanx for the advice but if u cant see wat it says yur fuckin blind [/b][/quote]
    dude how about you stop trying to be such a hardcore gangster
    "saying the same shit as someone before you is like double posting so you should die to."
    dude your a fucking moron are you seriously trying to be hardcore or are you just like 9.
    and my friend hardly does graffiti but he can tell its fucking horrible
    nase its a nice tag but i can hardly se the e cause of the white stuff around it
    seikt your se is huge and your other letters are tiny, and make the i's dot more circular or experiment with other ways to do a dot on the i because thats soooo over used