Haze - I like the orange one best, just ditch the arrows. And try and pick one or two ways of doing it and stick with them, you got a bunch of different ones going. I don't like the red one really, it's hard to read and looks like it has useless extra junk. The orange and pink are the best two, as well as the one immediately left of the orange. Pretty good though. I dig your Z and F. Keep practicing. Here's mine: [Broken External Image]:http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r108/PopwarSkater143/newstyleRESK.jpg
tell the dumbass that did that to do some research before he starts writing a dead legend writers name/
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dude how about you stop trying to be such a hardcore gangster "saying the same shit as someone before you is like double posting so you should die to." dude your a fucking moron are you seriously trying to be hardcore or are you just like 9. and my friend hardly does graffiti but he can tell its fucking horrible nase its a nice tag but i can hardly se the e cause of the white stuff around it seikt your se is huge and your other letters are tiny, and make the i's dot more circular or experiment with other ways to do a dot on the i because thats soooo over used [/b][/quote] lol it was sumptin random i came up with this morning at school n it seemed to make sense so i changed it but im changin it again anyway n ya im trynna change it
this **** so toy [/b][/quote] If you meant me, then yea I am. Condsidering I got into this last week, I'm not gonna even lie. I know I suck and I want to get good, telling me I'm toy doesn't help. If you meant my tag, well no shit. How about you try and help me instead of making fun of it?
resk make more fluent strokes it does show improvement from the stuff i saw the other night keep workin on that edit:i would leave it uppercase too
Well first off, get rid of the slashthrough/arrow. Other then that, I think I like the lower case a better, but get it either all curved or all rigid. A combination of the two makes it look kind of like a 5. Your E's look pretty good to me though. Maybe do a little something with the H, so it has a little something. As it is it's just plain, idk though, maybe it looks better that way. Mess around with it. Good though, practice.
haha, the shark is pretty cool. But what does that say? I can't really tell, looks cool though. Space it out a little more so it's more readable, or if it's cause that fucked up A you mentioned, then do another quick and put that up.
haha, the shark is pretty cool. But what does that say? I can't really tell, looks cool though. Space it out a little more so it's more readable, or if it's cause that fucked up A you mentioned, then do another quick and put that up. [/b][/quote] i like the shark too, but this is the tag thread, not blackbook hold on i'll go do another real quick...it says "aubrey" by the way, i was thinkin about a girl
i like the shark too, but this is the tag thread, not blackbook hold on i'll go do another real quick...it says "aubrey" by the way, i was thinkin about a girl [/b][/quote] Ahhh, haha. All right, cool then. I'll crit it when you repost it. Good luck with her by the way
well fuck...i did one and its pretty nice, but i dont have a digital camera so i use my cell phone, and verizon pix place is fuckin up...ill post it asap though
more feedback? what K would look better if you dont like it? and merks i love the character but hate the tag. it looks like your trying to be too technical.. lost the quotes and the random lines and fix the A.