stak i dont like your S but everything else isnt tooooooooo bad. dusk on the other hand i like the S but nothing else. whahappen i cant read it but looks fresh hungrs got nice dripsss
Reckon this one is better kill the curly shit on the K and it will be dope. Probably don't need the line above it either. Make the serif on the top of the S a bit shorter so it doesn't cut through the K. Kinda makes it look like you've put a T up there for some reason. Looking good though. The DU looks sick. So does the S except for the top bit.
both yall need to put it to pm's. getting a good positive vibe going and u fools are killing it. probably gunna get your post deleted anyway, along with this one but hush.
it should be readable.. it really isnt until after you read your name.. your letters should be the same size. i think you should start new. edit: Give crits before you ask for them.
Looks like its saying "34S" :\ Heres some attempts. I couldn't seem to take away the tail on the "T" because it just comes out when ever I tried to write a tag. And I managed to get one without the tail.. Although I think it looks bad.
ark - thats nice n simple. three letters may be hard to do more with but i think you could add more funk to it. dusk - your spray tags are pretty nice except for the under and over lines. maybe you could keep the one under it and shorten the horizontal bar a lot. and yeah, shorten the serif on the S. the written ones are good too. i'm not too sure about looping the K all the way back like that. seems like there's a bunch of other ways you could end it. tazm - the only letter that doesnt fit there is the M and try bringin your letters in a LITTLE bit closer together and see how it looks. blase - you gotta start simple. you connections arent really making sense. jus start out with even sized letters and tweak from there. tonic - it is simple right now and you can start playin with your letters a lot. you dont HAVE to lose the start on that T as long as you make it work with the rest of the tag. i just suggest you write out all your letters in as many different ways as you can. look at other tags you like and get some ideas flowin. keep writin out letters in different ways then formulate a tag around the letters you like.
hungr - AWESOME I'm lovin' it. Dusk - Good, good, but don't like the "k" in the second pic. I know it's the same, but the pic's dif and I just don't like it in that one. D: Blase - Too jumbled, couldn't read if I didn't know your name. And so yeah I changed my name, here's my new tag. [Broken External Image]:http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6426/0627072033nl2.th.jpg Pronounced like choice.
[Broken External Image]:http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/5914/picture136lx1.jpg new style [Broken External Image]:http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9728/picture137ka4.jpg hungr g is weird
new style and an old one so you guys can compare i even labled it for you so guys dont have to think to hard haha [Broken External Image]:http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/8360/newshut002qc6.th.jpg crits please
whahappen- nice new style - the smiley. hungr-lookin good. critz please...new name. [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled7-1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled2-2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled3-1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/Untitled1-5.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4369/krazyarrowdy8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4379/allovertowncr0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1451/bumpysignhj5.jpg this last one had some bumpy shit on it so it was hard to make a smooth konnection!!!
relax sac. tonen never gives crits. thats just him. and you cant really expect the junior members to really know any better despite people sayin GIVE CRITS BEFORE YOU ASK! but there it is again. anyway, i'm feelin #1 and #3 the most eventhough they all pretty nice. i jus dont really like the E's in the other ones mainly. ghost. i like the top right one because the A has a little curve at the top. makes it look better. glyce - it may be a LITTLE boring but its lookin nice. you should tweak your letters a bunch if you think its boring. jus try sumthin new. whahappen - the face with the crown on it is the 1st one you did that i like and the handy is lookin pretty dope too. jois - i think you gotta steer away from usin a huge circle as a dot for an I and try to put more curves in your letters. it jus seems so rigid right now.
View attachment 286097 View attachment 286098 man, sorry the flicks suck. ive been on a paint pen on black plastic. its addicting. glyce, sometimes simple is better. i like that. sac, i like #3 u hooker. cant go on tellin people how to improve once they reach a certian point. its up to u now. progress. tonen, like the last one.