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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
I know, ill post some on paper tonight...
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not at all. i dont mean to sound like i have a huge ego but i seem to be the only one crittin tonight so.
nez- your tag looks like it says alez, u should take off that wierd thing at the bottom of the N or leave some space there. other then that maybe lose the arrow and the quotes.
New handstyle, concept idea for a possible crew or some shit (SOME ONE CREW) and the penis one is for dissing the awful taggers in my town who go over my shit for no reason.
ya pretty much, they will prob think your homosexual...start war or leave them alone and they might leave you.
and fix your r, it looks like roast
yo. Im going to start chucking this up... thaughts?
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^ Like the tag...But maybe shrink the Z down a bit or make the E slightly bigger as it's too small...Might just make things flow more.
Ah fucking shit!
you write ark too?
Do you mind if i keep writing it, i'm from England so it's not liek we'll clash.
Can i get some crits on this tag? The "A" is crap because i messed up, but the rest is how i want it.[Broken External Image]:http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/290/dsc01461oe4.jpg
damn... well i can tell your still pretty early in your writing stage. If you keep the name its alright, im in canada. But feel free to try different names... haha
well your tag needs alot of work. take out the doo dads and stuff until you have solid leter style down.
I think i need to take my time more.
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Thats pretty bad... Just start with simples.
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any crits please =D
how can i work on this tag?
fix your a and r and then try to make every thing the same size
Leski - lose those long extensions, not just the arrows at the end...
vagrant, leski, jest, egodeath, twisties, kstwo, nez, wyze, ofb, rast, besar, and nasr, you should all just stick to what you like, but practice simple letter structures as well and keep practising IE: write your name at least 100 times on scrap paper every day for a little while.
Haze, mane, and jers, Im thinkin you guys are alright, just keep doing what youre doig and youll get better... One thing for mane, just lose that little curl on the end of the e... it makes a solid simple tag look less solid
As for neo and hoostein, STAY THE FUCK OFF THE STREETS, you guys are toys, take the bits of advice from above and apply them to paper, NOT THE STREETS. Im not gonna try and say 'no offence' or 'Im not trying to be a dick'. Im blatantly being a dick, but its for your own good.
JersOne- I disagree with that other guy I love the R. The O should be bigger though
Skuz- you speak the truth!
He gave you crits, quit whining. Just because it's not what you want to hear doesn't mean it isn't true. Thanks for the crits man.
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This is what I was going for. crits
Separate names with a comma.