I'm posting this in here for all the toys that want to give up, or need some uplifting ego boost. This was my tag 4 years ago when I first started writing..... I love how I made my U look like a V hahahahhahah [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r247/blakereimmuth/P5050418.jpg Time will help all of you, remember that.... Peace to the up and coming writers, and remember to never quit. Rogue
These are alright...however, i think the letters should be slightly closer together as to it just breaks up the flow. Or just try some different style letters. [Broken External Image]:http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4111/picture0091bv7.jpg
ABOUT - I think the a is too big. I ditched the last handstyle with the curly r and t. I like this one much more. Crits?
done worry,. myne was worse =] View attachment 319074 toytag View attachment 319075 more "up to date" dont worry fellas. everyone starts out toy no matter what.
Ark- No flow, letters are far apart. Each- Getting better About- You're really just leaving all of the letters there, they don't seem to belong with each other but you cramped them together anyway...Like a class photo... Rast- the one to the left of the big solo S...I like.
Rast, try using a lower case a in the style thats in normal computer font, with the upper hook and everything. it might flow better, imo.
I guess that is the wonder of illegal art. It has no bounds , but still, sometimes loose boundries can be beneficial to everyone. Keep in mind that those comments were directed towards very specific photos, and however harsh, were still meant as constructive crits. Hoostein - New tag on paper is starting to look a lot smoother, keep at it Some quick jots... [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd72/nibjapmc/Picture007.jpg
I suggest losing the curly thing at the left of the A, but thats just me. Other than that it has decent flow. Go bigger to avoid the clutter and unreadability. Anyone have crits on my shit?
Skuz- I dig the throw, and the Chiller-style (black with red shadow) next to it. However, I think you got a little out of hand with add-ons. Maybe slim it down to the best ones. I like the outline on "ONER."
Olick, nice flow. i like the throw skuz. Amek, put that on a bigger surface, can't really tell if it's good or not. Jens, nice flow for a kiwi. I can't use those and make good shit. [Broken External Image]:http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/1429/bombsc001tj6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4500/bombsc002mw0.jpg
CEAS - Spread the letters out so they touch but dont cross over each other as much so its wasier to read other than that the top one is perfect
jens- shits good. just keep practicing and repetition with it. [Broken External Image]:http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/flickrock087.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/umzor.jpg I'm keeping it simple for now. Anything I should do?
[Broken External Image]:http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b188/vincecrisis/wuzzuh.jpg I'm still working on it. Personally I like my first one but we'll see where this goes.