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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
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just a quick one...
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hate pushing the obnogs but this needs all the crits that can be juiced
ok this is my attempt at more flow and i guess style also?
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D-stroy - i think you did get more flow. this tag is by far way better than the first one. even though the first one was still nice.
cease- try not to attach letters, make them all the same size...try all caps or lowers. you kind of have a upper case A thrown in the middle.
Napom- thats pretty sick. just drop the a attached to the p
Construction Dumpsters Are good cause they travel kiwi homade...
nice, im feelin it
twisties looks WAAAAY better man. i like the top left one.
undergroundanimal, i can't read the but they look fresh.
decoy second one doesn't look half bad
jers i'm liking it a lot
anemptyswishersweet, i like it just drop the unnecessary stuff
cease, the flow doesn't look good. don't force it
revamped tag. outlined/shadowed in pen so you can see it (highlighter sometimes doesn't turn out in the scanner) now you CAN'T tell my my j looks like a y. i like the last one best. CRITS PLEASE!
MAYJER - I like the very last one a lot.
ARK - That looks really nice keep rockin that one!
i the middle tag is a fucked up so dont focus on it so much.... other than that advice/crits?
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2nd handsytle ive ever done....did it with whiteout..It was only thing i had at the time!
What you guys think?
Give Crits To Get Them!!
kosher - i think it would be better in a thick as in marker or something drippy. it looks like a highlighter. otherwise it seems straight
intaout - im likin the drippy shit n the tag. i wouldnt change shit.
so far its the really thing that i find that flows. even though it seems typical.
anyone have suggesions how to change it. crits?
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done - make the letters flow a lil more and i dont think you are ready for drips!
love - that really doesnt flow cus the l,o, and the v are connected but the E is just chillin on the side, i really cant think of any thing about it, just practice alot more i guess..
flash - what does it say? cus the letters are too jumbled, maybe not, get a better pic!
heres some of mine- crits?
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well you dont know a damn thing about philly wikeds so yea, imma work with that one!
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