[Broken External Image]:http://aycu31.webshots.com/image/34510/2001528878248445419_fs.jpg Did it in an exchange with this chick i write with. Crits, and help please.
dying to live, i like it. it's solid steps start out by ditching all the add ons, then make sure the letters are the same size and pretty close together and see where that gets you and don't do the T so that it covers the whole thing or so that the bars come down, you can't pull it off aotps, same crits as steps but i really don't like any of your letters try to find different ways of doing them nekid i don't like it. i'm not a big fan of phillies so if they are decent then alright that's fine just clean them up, they're messy and i know they're supposed to be messy but like they're messier than they should be einsamkeit it's good. personally i'd use a different d
Wuzgood i just recently started to create a tag of my own. A bunch of my buddies do it so i thought i would screw around with some lettering and see what i came up with. tell me what you think. pointers appreciated.
^ no no no no no. i'm telling everyone the same thing "start out by ditching all the add ons, then make sure the letters are the same size and pretty close together and see where that gets you" your style ain't bad. i really like the a. if those are 2 o's i suggest making them the same so as not to confuse the reader.
well... make your letters as simple as possible do that for a while then, when you really start to "feel" the letters bend them a lil but ONLY A LITTLE, dont over bend, cause that looks gay uhh,, yeah
^^^^mee too, try and make some of the letters connect together see how thath looks like the e connect to the a or the n to the o play with it some.
...I think your a is to spread apart... y'know? Try making the top of it swoop further down so the circle part at the bottom touches it...
yo havent been on in months due to getting caught so im now posting stuff from earlier on in the year. [/IMG] and finally my really old one haha