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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. skiv

    skiv Banned

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    looks pretty good to me
     
  2. -EgoDeath-

    -EgoDeath- Senior Member

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    Steele - the S doesn't really look like an S to me, the TEEL looks pretty good, but I would say make the last E like the other 2, or drop it altogether.
     
  3. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    just go simple and work from there.
    lose all random extensions and arrows and shit.

    just go really simple
     
  4. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    Houseplant - Im not really feeling any of those except maybe the second ones from the top. You tried to get wayy to complicated.
    Steele - Also wayy to complicated. Focus on the letters not the addons. Last E doesnt fit at all and neither does the S. TEEL looks alright though.

    ai105.photobucket.com_albums_m223_ShanestaGangsta_53400001_5.jpg

    Crits?
     
  5. Street Smart

    Street Smart Senior Member

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    5funerals - looks nice, just work on the E i think its ruining the flow
     
  6. GeeK

    GeeK Senior Member

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    houseplant... keep trying dude i have no say in whats nice or ugly but jsut keep practicing






    i tried something new with the R i dont know whoes that other dude with the sharpie tag above mines

    View attachment 329451
     
  7. the end

    the end Senior Member

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    both wack man, yours and his.

    keep it simple, master good handwriting before you can do crazy stuff, essentially.
     
  8. mosezone

    mosezone Senior Member

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    the R actually looks pretty nice, it's just the other letters. i especially don't like the E.
     
  9. the end

    the end Senior Member

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    the R looks nice, minus the swirl.
     
  10. GeeK

    GeeK Senior Member

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    ok thanks for the info guys


    this is how it looks on paper


    my R before i tried that loop which im gonna ditch now

    View attachment 329453
     
  11. DRONE_905

    DRONE_905 Senior Member

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    nice shit Dr. Kazer
     
  12. Haz-E

    Haz-E Senior Member

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    Steele Yooo Hit Me Back I Pmed You Dude
     
  13. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    GEEK - PLEASE LOSE THE QUOTATIONS! I like your J and R but not the E or the extension on the I. Work on the 2 so it flows better. Eventually you should go back to that crazy extension on the R cause it was pretty fresh.


    Thanks for the crits streetsmart!
     
  14. GeeK

    GeeK Senior Member

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    thanks dude i appreciate it..

    and the extension on the R are you talking about teh Swirl one or the sharpie one i posted on the paper
     
  15. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    the post before the last post.
     
  16. munch1

    munch1 Member

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    CRITS?

    mozes and geek= good shit i like it
     
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  17. beyondyereyes

    beyondyereyes Senior Member

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    Munch I would say it's pretty sick but perhaps make the "U" a little larger to match the other letters. The one at the top is pretty sick though.

    ai250.photobucket.com_albums_gg278_unholygrave_zitz.jpg

    I honestly need new ideas.
     
  18. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    munch i wouldent relli consider that a toy tag i say thats a decent tag rather stay up bro
     
  19. Dying to live

    Dying to live Senior Member

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  20. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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