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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. STAR01

    STAR01 Senior Member

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    sorry to bump but i didnt get any crits on this
     
  2. Cy-anide

    Cy-anide Senior Member

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    star- its good i think u shud try a thicker marker though :)
     
  3. unsuccsessfull

    unsuccsessfull Senior Member

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  4. the end

    the end Senior Member

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    does that say ARSOL?
     
  5. unsuccsessfull

    unsuccsessfull Senior Member

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  6. the end

    the end Senior Member

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    yea yea, thats what i thought it was suppose to be but unless i look hard enough it looks like it begins with AR... though i can see the RE better now.

    what was throing me off was the top of the E how it flares since it isnt a very solid connection. i thought that part was like some dot for style
     
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  7. unsuccsessfull

    unsuccsessfull Senior Member

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  8. remos

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  9. lolque?

    lolque? Senior Member

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    star01 - dont force urself to connect all ur letters, it looks almost like normal cursive stuff.
    remos-liking it.
    ep1c-work on the letter structure, and make em all the same size
    rook.-make all the letters the same size, work on the structure.
    cy-anide-digging that shit, nice drips too.

    heres mine: ai258.photobucket.com_albums_hh277_lolque_DSCF4576.jpg
    crits please.
     
  10. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    try to add some flow like spread it out abit and lean your letters
     
  11. lolque?

    lolque? Senior Member

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    what do you mean lean my letters ?
     
  12. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    instead of them being upright, you lean them back or something.
    whatever you feel comfortable with
     
  13. lolque?

    lolque? Senior Member

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    so, i reworked it. ai258.photobucket.com_albums_hh277_lolque_DSCF4577.jpg
    crits plz
     
  14. Street Smart

    Street Smart Senior Member

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    loose the extention, use simple letters.
     
  15. kase121

    kase121 Senior Member

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    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h239_kase121_Photo179.jpg

    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h239_kase121_Photo180.jpg

    critics/help please, i suck at handstyles
     
  16. Animal

    Animal Senior Member

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    Kase- those look nice, only i would fix the tops of the B's to where they dont stick so far off the top.
    the science looks ill as hell though.
     
  17. kase121

    kase121 Senior Member

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  18. Animal

    Animal Senior Member

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  19. kase121

    kase121 Senior Member

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    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h239_kase121_Photo181.jpg

    random words around my room
     
  20. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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