that's a shame, i loved your L's. Thanks man, i know, but i just get so anxious with it. Here is some more simplistic tags i did. the bottom one has an ugly h, but what do you guys think about the connection of the T to the H?

 

im completely lost on doing a tag...
help?

 

Fuck, New page.

Yah tech, you kinda got it with the top one.
Keep working with that one, try leaning it and that kind of stuff. Give it your own flavour but keep it basic, graff takes dedication and a long ass time to get proficent at. It sucks but the key is to keep practicing and resist the urge to put your stuff up before its ready, thats a big thing, you will regret it when you see it later down the road.

Thanks for commenting muse, I'll work out that G.
Your painted tag is a little thick, try and thin it down maybe? So the flairs are more prominent. I cant do flairs so I shouldnt talk, lol

Chump, start with basic printing then pay attention to the strokes that make the letters, bend 'em, experiment, ext. Look at how other people have doen things, read the advice given to them on how to improve or what people didnt like.

 

Leski, your I looked more like a Z.

 

bump new page

 

muse- work at it

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is this going in the right direction? The bottom is a more clean look of what i was doing, but the first one is the C and H connection i was thinking of using.

 

thrice- ye thats a bit better try and lose like the cursive writeing style not that good but gettin better man

any crits???

 

give em to get em.

 

wtf i did u tool

 

and saying that makes me a "tool" how?

dont just give them to tha kid who posts above u, give em to everyone.

more u give tha more u get.

even though u dont deserve it after being a dick but w.e....

thu? if so, fix it up so that it actually looks like a t

 

muse, sick flairs at the top of your m and a.
bring the top of your s higher and leave your can for like a second longer so that it does like a hollow circle.

 

that was the only crit that i had tho so thats what i put
cuz urs looks dope and same with sez so i dont want 2 look like a fuck dick sucker ye diggg?

 

meh. works for me.

stilll didnt have any reason to call me a tool though. haha

 

tru
my bad
so u got a crit
lol

 

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rank im loving that tag keep up the good work.

heres a tag i did influenced by my boy teech:

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Thrice its all about flow

make it flowin

 

wordd, k's not bad, your other letters arent matchin tho

 

pretty shitty but i tried some more
I know my shit is generally

Muse-The flairs are nuts, i like it and have no clue how to do them, I do think it's be cool if you added a dot after the ! to even it out

Sez- I like that K better

Thrice- Maybe make the T capitalized

Cin- a little more space?

CY-anide- your shit is always amazing.