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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. kaze!

    kaze! Member

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    change your s, make it a tad simpler and stop outlining it
     
  2. Degausserr x

    Degausserr x Senior Member

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    Kaze- I like the letters at the bottom, but work on the R. Give it more flow.
     
  3. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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    Kabs, your letters are kinda sharp. In a bad way. The tag is jagged and doesn't have much flow... Hit the basics, work on a super simple letter style and just rock that for awhile. Like basic printing with just a tiny touch of flair.
    Not trying to rag on you, trying to help.

    Kaze I like it. Nice and simple, just keep experimenting and practicing.
    Love the Remo, needs a little work on the shape of the R.
    The kaze needs a little work on the k, try angling the top arm up and shortening it and loosing the tail on the R.

    Still working on this style, I really like how its turning out. Might actualy start using it soon.

    Any critz on it would be great.
    Short version.
    [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1927/geski9nh2.jpg
    Tall version.
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  4. Devoted

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  7. SAID

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    nice flairs on your last one man
    sexyyy ;)
     
  8. Eack

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  9. Devoted

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  10. rave905

    rave905 Senior Member

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    yo eack the middle one is the best ut im not feelin the second e its pretty gross
     
  11. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    View attachment 344379

    Handystyle for a battle on another forum.

    Eack yeah those lower case E's aRE nasty.Make the middle bar bend less.
     
  12. Flash_One

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  13. Drakula

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    don't post here again.

    Those are soooooo dope.
     
  14. Blam!

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    ya you dont belong in toy tag, get out now!
     
  15. SAID

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    that flow is sickkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
     
  16. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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    drakula- id say lose the extension on the left of the F
    devoted - thats pretty nice i like the S, has some good style. only thing is "DUSK" might be a pretty played word
    eack - those need alot of work, completely scrap the top one and fix the E on the second one. the third could look ok if you cleaned it up a bit and fixed the S.. personally i dont like it when the back tail goes further back than the top bit, looks kinda bad and lose the extension on the bottom of the A, just use a bar across the middle
    kaze - id say they look pretty good, nice n simple, just make the letters a bit closer together

    heres some of mine..

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3870/feb1780gz6.jpg

    old word.. did this a while back, as you can see the can shat itself

    [Broken External Image]:http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4451/feb1781rg0.th.jpg
     
  17. SAID

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  20. JEDI-MASTER

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