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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Dryft

    Dryft Member

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    ai113.photobucket.com_albums_n221_Kiations_Smaz2.jpg

    CRITS
    I tried to fix the A and Z, still not quite workin for me
     
  2. SAID

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    try putting a small a.
    not capital
     
  3. ♠James♠

    ♠James♠ Senior Member

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  4. Dryft

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    k,i just did a few, I'll put the pics up in a second.
     
  5. SAID

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  6. Dryft

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    ai113.photobucket.com_albums_n221_Kiations_Smaz3.jpg

    There I tried it,
    fackkk, this is actually pissing me off so much
    hahaa
     
  7. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    lmaoo.
    all trial and error man.
    feeling your blue one most outta all of em
     
  8. Dryft

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    k, Thanks man
    But I'm dead tired, so I'll post some more stuff tomorrow.
     
  9. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    ahaha aiight
    keep workin on that flow
     
  10. Jihad

    Jihad Senior Member

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    ai32.tinypic.com_sqli1d.jpg
     
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  11. Thrice

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    James wrong thread, post those in blackbook. Those aren't tags.
     
  12. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    dryft, i think your letters are too spaced out, and i dont like your S or M.
     
  13. Jihad

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    dryft-go back to simples a little more. that doesn't really have enough flow and going simple again you can rework your flow throughout the tag.
     
  14. Jihad

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    go with the blue one yea... thats got the most flow.
     
  15. Thrice

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    jihad- keep a consistent i and try to avoid the variations of letterspacing, connectors and overlaps. The I's throw off any possible flow because you can see how their stem are in diff spots in relevance of the letters next to them.
    Crit please
    ai31.tinypic.com_1412x40.jpg
     
  16. ♠James♠

    ♠James♠ Senior Member

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    oops sorry lol

    Quote Thrice:"James wrong thread, post those in blackbook. Those aren't tags."

    How the hell u do quotes? lol
     
  17. INDEPENDENT

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    all you guys have to cut the boring out of you tag lol.

    make it interesting but not shitty,
    like clean and sharp? but just practise tons, and try new things try to get a handstyle down. and try to flow.

    heres some old pics.

    ai4.photobucket.com_albums_y108_313eminem313_graff_SSPX0136.jpg
    diso
    ai4.photobucket.com_albums_y108_313eminem313_graff_SSPX0137.jpg
    wares
    ai4.photobucket.com_albums_y108_313eminem313_graff_SSPX0355.jpg
    top right of pic-diso
     
  18. rocketeer

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    ^^not sure if its the tag or the focus, but I can't really read it.

    and about cutting the boring out, well we all gotta start simple and work up from there. you're just catching us in the growth phase.
     
  19. INDEPENDENT

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    sorry about the pictures, yea the focus is fucked, and, yes start with simples please, nothing looks worse then seeing arrows and stuff through your own tag lol ive seen it happen.
     
  20. sallybsk

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    lols, i know i was using a fat marker, i hadnt used in a while so i wasnt used to it . :p

    i do some better ones with pencil but i just felt like vandalizing my desk some more. but thanks for the advice.