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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    yeah all the writers know that im fuckin around.

    next time ill add jayyyykayyy
    just for you?
    k.
     
  2. ♠James♠

    ♠James♠ Senior Member

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    I understand why not eh E but why the C too? Just a Q so I cna fix it.
     
  3. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    cause its whack.
    seriously.
    use simple letters
     
  4. overdue

    overdue Senior Member

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    your c has no structure
     
  5. JEDI-MASTER

    JEDI-MASTER Elite Member

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  6. ♠James♠

    ♠James♠ Senior Member

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  7. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    Jedi master the middle and top left are fucking fresh. hell. the whole page is fucking great.
     
  8. boobies!

    boobies! Member

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    ai132.photobucket.com_albums_q22_Kranks1_IMG_0522.jpg

    Dace - lose those wierd squiggles at the end of your letters.
    Jedi - cant make out alot of it, but some of it pretty good.
    the end - fuking dope
     
  9. ♠James♠

    ♠James♠ Senior Member

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    Work on your O and K
    Edit:
    ai28.tinypic.com_2na7k82.jpg
     
    Last edited: Feb 24, 2008
  10. Jihad

    Jihad Senior Member

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    in this pic, i used a mop that i had just made. i was testing it out. im new to using mops so i didn't really want to use a whole lot of ink especially on a mall bathroom that was going to get buffed rather quickly. i just used the dryed ink in the nib; i didnt really try and squeeze out any ink. At any rate, what do you guys think even though i looks really ghostly?


    ai26.tinypic.com_10pymuu.jpg
     
  11. ♠James♠

    ♠James♠ Senior Member

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    First of all, whats it say? From what I can see it looks pretty good. Work on the last letter cause I have no idea what it is.
     
  12. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    thats even worse.

    SIMPLE letters.
    keyboard letters.
     
  13. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    don't like the A james and get rid of those extensions on the bottom of the A and C, the E's extension is fine tho.
     
  14. sallybsk

    sallybsk Senior Member

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    jihad, the nib of a mop doesnt really dry out, so idk bout your paint. it should be able to flow through the mop so when you write, it can go through the nib(slightly). then squeezing = more flow and drips.
    Are you using your own squeeze?
     
  15. ♠James♠

    ♠James♠ Senior Member

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    keyboard simple looks os bad though, and yeah that one before the last one I posted really is nt good I must admit lol.
     
  16. BZAR

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  17. JEDI-MASTER

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    thanx man
     
  18. ♠James♠

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  19. Dert666

    Dert666 New Member

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    hey everyone. i write DERT.
    can i get some crits on these?
    ai174.photobucket.com_albums_w110_taylor567_bucket_dertone.jpg
    ai174.photobucket.com_albums_w110_taylor567_bucket_derttwo.jpg
     
  20. JEDI-MASTER

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    ur E's liee my old one....w/e....1st one um lose arrow, and random line in the d nd take ur E out of ur D. 2nd T top to thin and ur E n the D fucks up the flow in the. and in both put ur letter togeter closer...needs alotta work homie