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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    Damn, It'd be nice if I could crit you guys, but I don't know shit about style. I'm as toyish as they get. And theres no way I'm putting my shitty tag on the street until it looks at the very least decent.

    Now, I'm aware that theres no way you guys can help me anymore. You've told me all you can. But can you tell me if these few crap tags that I came up with are at LEAST better than the last two that I had? Which are located here: http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=702&page=912
    And here: http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=702&page=911


    Now for the most recent ones. Are they better? Which is the best?
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  2. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    Milk - Go simple. if youd listen to the advice people would give you youd be better. But you need to go simple. copy letters off your keyboard. then slowly bend then and shit.. Dont do arrows out of letters, and dont make the letters blockish like that, it constricts flow
     
  3. kick

    kick Member

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  4. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    lose those accessories and extra lines. Fix that B, looks like an R.
     
  5. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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  6. Cute

    Cute Member

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    went around town last night to hit up a few spots unfortunately didn't get my favorite one on camera, hopped out at the drive through at bk and hit up the menu sign...but it was gone this morning when i went for pictures
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  7. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    And u used wat fot that?
     
  8. Cute

    Cute Member

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  9. PumpItUp

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  10. Street Wize

    Street Wize Member

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    And that is probably why one of ur tags was gone already
     
  11. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    they would have buffed anything.
     
  12. SCIEnce802

    SCIEnce802 Banned

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    Pumpitup--- Top right one is the best... has the most flow.
     
  13. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    cute, your tag has mad flow, i just dont like the color part at the bottom.
     
  14. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    Advice Needed

    Hey,
    I just started out
    and I kinda need some advice cas for a first tag I think it's decent but still kinda toy
    I wanna make it good before writing anywhere BIG
    Please give some advice XD
     

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  15. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    you got a good start.
    try and check out the NEW TO GRAFF thread.
     
  16. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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  17. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    no problem man.
    that thread helps allot of people out and gives them direction when theyre stuck.
     
  18. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    one more thing,
    haha
    Where is the new to graff thread, I can't find it XD
     
  19. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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  20. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Mania-Stick with the two on the right, and i'd loose the squiggles on the i.
    Crit?? Tablet =]
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