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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. The_NaMEz_BaNKz

    The_NaMEz_BaNKz Elite Member

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    lol AHEM....hats preety funny tag..
     
  2. m.ziggy

    m.ziggy Senior Member

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    i think you have the simple flow now, start playing around with the letters more
     
  3. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    Thrice I'm really likin number 5, but I still think you could do a little extra with the M
    and do you think if I curved the path to the K in more it would start to come together a bit better?
     
  4. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Ya im in the process of adding style slowly while maintaining strong flow and structure. I tend to get carried away. bankz, the tag itself is funny or what i write?
     
  5. geneparmesan

    geneparmesan Senior Member

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    yeah, work off of number 5.


    panik-try not even connecting any letters at all, just add a little flow to them, you just gotta play around with each letter. try and even write the letter a different way than you normally do. like write your A a different way(example; if you start your A's from the left leg, start from the right leg & see how it comes out.), if you get what im saying. just gotta fuck around. you'll come across something new with each letter.
     
  6. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    thanks man I'll try it out
     
  7. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai31.tinypic.com_2e4gd4g.gif

    ai32.tinypic.com_10pvoqu.jpg

    Tried to straighten up the first one and used a new E and It looks squished cus I was using a piece of paper.

    Says TESONE
    Crits?
     
  8. geneparmesan

    geneparmesan Senior Member

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    panik, youre one of the few people on here, ive seen, that take crits in a good way, and actually try to develop your style off of what other experienced writers give you advice on.


    tes-make your O and your N next to each other instead of on top. your E in ONE is bump though. so is your other E & your S.
     
  9. m.ziggy

    m.ziggy Senior Member

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    thats good advice man, im getting yours up in a minute
     
  10. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai29.tinypic.com_30i7sw4.jpg
    I tried moving the n next to the o in that one any better?
    and probably sounds dumb but what do you mean by bump?
     
  11. -Panik-

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    ai27.tinypic.com_5n4tgn.jpg
    I tried a halo around the down arrow under the I,
    haha as oyu can see I failed
    I won't do the thing I did with the N and the K anymore cas I don't like how it looks
    -- New p? good/bad
    (btw thanks gene i find my A is a little more defined from your hint)
    Crits
     
  12. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    wow, sorry for double posting but that looks brutal.
    my pencil sketch was much better i dragged my marker to much
     
  13. m.ziggy

    m.ziggy Senior Member

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    old.....

    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h239_kase121_movie.jpg

    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h239_kase121_srxr.jpg

    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h239_kase121_liho.jpg

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    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h239_kase121_liho2.jpg

    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h239_kase121_church.jpg

    haha mine are sooo shitty
     
  14. Thrice

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    Not huge with the T, and i'd lose that N and K overlap on the top of the I. At least take away the N's extension.
    Crits please
    ai32.tinypic.com_k3rxoo.jpg
     
  15. -Panik-

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    Mid right is look fucken chill man
    and yea I don't even know why I overlapped it:p
    haha but it's a P
    haha keep workin ur flow man it's getting soo sick
     
  16. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Panik your p's getting there but it looks too much like a T everything else is nice though
     
  17. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    should I lose the halo completely or tidy it up?
     
  18. m.ziggy

    m.ziggy Senior Member

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    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h239_kase121_Untitled_3.jpg

    curve it down alittle like that ^^^ your getting there, keep playing with it
     
  19. -Panik-

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    alright thanks alot man :D
     
  20. -Panik-

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    ai26.tinypic.com_30b0ols.jpg
    This is what I came out with,
    under the underline it says 705, my area code it would look neater but I wrote this kinda small
    any final crits before I hit the hay XD