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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
lol AHEM....hats preety funny tag..
i think you have the simple flow now, start playing around with the letters more
Thrice I'm really likin number 5, but I still think you could do a little extra with the M
and do you think if I curved the path to the K in more it would start to come together a bit better?
Ya im in the process of adding style slowly while maintaining strong flow and structure. I tend to get carried away. bankz, the tag itself is funny or what i write?
yeah, work off of number 5.
panik-try not even connecting any letters at all, just add a little flow to them, you just gotta play around with each letter. try and even write the letter a different way than you normally do. like write your A a different way(example; if you start your A's from the left leg, start from the right leg & see how it comes out.), if you get what im saying. just gotta fuck around. you'll come across something new with each letter.
thanks man I'll try it out
Tried to straighten up the first one and used a new E and It looks squished cus I was using a piece of paper.
panik, youre one of the few people on here, ive seen, that take crits in a good way, and actually try to develop your style off of what other experienced writers give you advice on.
tes-make your O and your N next to each other instead of on top. your E in ONE is bump though. so is your other E & your S.
thats good advice man, im getting yours up in a minute
I tried moving the n next to the o in that one any better?
and probably sounds dumb but what do you mean by bump?
I tried a halo around the down arrow under the I,
haha as oyu can see I failed
I won't do the thing I did with the N and the K anymore cas I don't like how it looks
-- New p? good/bad
(btw thanks gene i find my A is a little more defined from your hint)
wow, sorry for double posting but that looks brutal.
my pencil sketch was much better i dragged my marker to much
haha mine are sooo shitty
Not huge with the T, and i'd lose that N and K overlap on the top of the I. At least take away the N's extension.
Mid right is look fucken chill man
and yea I don't even know why I overlapped it
haha but it's a P
haha keep workin ur flow man it's getting soo sick
Panik your p's getting there but it looks too much like a T everything else is nice though
should I lose the halo completely or tidy it up?
curve it down alittle like that ^^^ your getting there, keep playing with it
alright thanks alot man
This is what I came out with,
under the underline it says 705, my area code it would look neater but I wrote this kinda small
any final crits before I hit the hay XD
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