Cyto-You need some flow, try to keep the letters the same size Wise-All of your letters look out of place with eachother simplistic, reads "coa" View attachment 357673
its real hard to see in yellow and that a needs some work still trying to develope my online any tips?
There isn't any flow in your letters, it looks like shit. Try to keep it simple and don't use extensions.
bloot-too light to see glyce-idk its too messy View attachment 357676 just a one time use name-waman. idk it has mad flow, but looks like shit cuz its sideways
can i get some real crits- maybe some "ideas"... or "orginality" idk if anybodys ever heard of that on here. im not gonna write fuckin unicorns, starts and bubble letters- the worlds not like that; thats not reality. my letters are suppost to get bigger and have a down up down curve from left to right- yes thats right... its on purpose. life isn't preportional and pretty, its fuckin ugly- like my letters. if you don't like it shove it up your ass. if you can see that... help me out because i know im a toy. thanks.
i know what your trying to do lol... just write it again with all the letters the same width and hight. keep that r down... or try a uppercase.
huhuhuh. but its almost true when your starting out try to be"original" by adding a few arrows. some crazy underlines, maybey even a few lines straight over the tag! but sia i say work on your letters, the abrupt sharp points look wack. and the curve of the i is bad too.
why don't you get off your high horse and say something helpful. this forum isn't for dissing and beef its for people helping people with there hands.
Jihad- You ask for crits and opinions, and then tell everyone to fuck off and your letters are supposed to look like shit. WTF?
Stop being so defensive; You were clearly under the impression that it's original to suck. I was only trying to remove you from that mentality.
thanks man trying it with a new s ickis3- its ok but get rid of those arrows and keep the arch on the r down, make it kind of look like the top of your n
started too close on those flairs and it dripped, but I didnt need to tell you that. Space out the letters a bit more, the crowding makes the R illegible.