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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. WiseCracker

    WiseCracker Senior Member

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    yo man i liked it before, try to develop the older one, this one isn't as nice. the s doesn't flow with the rest.
     
  2. Slushi

    Slushi Banned

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  3. wolsley

    wolsley Senior Member

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  4. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    3rds tha best. Just make the dot on the i a little smaller.
     
  5. m.ziggy

    m.ziggy Senior Member

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    i like that one just without the little lines after the e
     
  6. H3TT1NG3R

    H3TT1NG3R Elite Member

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    omg abide those are amazing
     
  7. Slushi

    Slushi Banned

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    Decent, not amazing.
     
  8. cest2

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  9. wolsley

    wolsley Senior Member

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    I agree, My shit is nowhere near as good as what the rest of my town/citys writers have to offer.
     
  10. Slushi

    Slushi Banned

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    You're on the right track... try not doing your underline from inside your A
     
  11. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    My first attempts at a one liner any crits?

    ai26.tinypic.com_im2hhe.jpg
    ai27.tinypic.com_t8rwhl.jpg

    Abide- those are pretty sick the onlything I can see is that the dot on the i is a little big and I don't like the a for the underline

    cest- make the letters a little bigger and spread out from each other
     
  12. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Abide-sick stuff man, nice
    yarbles-go simple, very simple
    Crit please
    ai27.tinypic.com_16honxt.jpg
     
  13. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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    i like these two a lot
     
  14. mosezone

    mosezone Senior Member

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  15. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai28.tinypic.com_m9866g.jpg

    Something like that any better or simpler?

    and mose I Like those tags.
    nice and clean
     
  16. mmmburgers

    mmmburgers Elite Member

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    ai237.photobucket.com_albums_ff286_mmmburgers_Picture004_1.jpg
    kemist handstyle
    critzzzzzzzzzzzzzz?
    (sorry for the size, will resize next time)
     
  17. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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    JERS: think I've said it before, but always love your stuff. Only crit is the bottom half of the E sitting a little too close to the J.
    ABIDE: for the A, keep it whipped out like that, but, as a few other have said, not all the way into an underline.. still nice though!
    CEST2; I don't like the C to the E connection.. and let the T be the same size as the other letters.
    AHEM: Change the H, it goes against the flow. Maybe use a lowercase E? Whatever works for you.. Also have a flick for you below.
    MOES; no crits from me, i like it

    My first drips;
    [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/1653/dsc02985ly0.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/849/50055778ne9.jpg
    One I don't like;
    [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/3523/77237093ju2.jpg
    Random words:
    [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/6192/aliceru2.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2913/trickzep7.jpg
    One for Thrice // AHEM:
    [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9407/ahemit9.jpg
     
  18. Duct Tape & Death Threats

    Duct Tape & Death Threats Senior Member

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  19. emokid

    emokid Senior Member

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    first time out everr

    ai197.photobucket.com_albums_aa215_pork_album_DSCN7223.jpg

    ai197.photobucket.com_albums_aa215_pork_album_DSCN7225.jpg

    sloppy cos i was SCARED.

    those are some serious drips koer :)
     
  20. -Ark-

    -Ark- Member

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    emokid - I'm feelin' it, except for the halo. Keep it up.

    Bumpin' this pic for more crits.
     

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