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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai27.tinypic.com_r0e0pw.jpg
    Crits?

    Mane: I like that and I actually like your e

    Syrup: change everything but the s and the y
     
  2. RobG

    RobG Member

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    sen - that shits dope man
    yarbles - no flow, your letters just dont seem to fit they all got different styles, try to keep it consistent

    heres some Philly handstyles i been workin on, lemme know if ya dig em or not

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    sorry the pics are so big, cant figure out how to get em smaller right now
     
  3. RobG

    RobG Member

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    i write MASEK if you cant read em
     
  4. RobG

    RobG Member

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    sorry about the tripple post, just had to bump this shit so people will see it on the fresh page.
     
  5. tempest

    tempest Senior Member

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    nice job. try sum wickeds!
     
  6. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    lovin the philly steez kid, keep it up.
     
  7. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    Bump. There we go. It's a new page. Estas contento Sen?
    Syrup, like everyone else has been saying, throw everything away except the S and the Y. I'm talking about your one liner here. I don't like the Y in the second picture. Keep the S and the Y from the first pic.

    Saek, take the arrow off of the K. I don't like your S too much. Maybe because it sorta looks like mine. Or maybe because it just doesn't appeal to me. I'm not sure yet. Um, rework the A I guess? It seems sort of unbalanced/unlevel if that makes sense. And I guess I like the E.

    Crits please?
     
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  8. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    i got one, dont write Serum, its too close to SIRUM whos a famous writer
     
  9. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    Damn, are you serious? Where is this guy located?

    But anyways, what do you think of that anyway?
     
  10. innerbleeding

    innerbleeding Senior Member

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  11. SyrupNZ

    SyrupNZ Member

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    Syrup

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    Trying to get better, i think all the practise is working. I did all these lame tags around it but the looked gay so i cut them out. Crits please
     
  12. SyrupNZ

    SyrupNZ Member

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    Yeah, i don't know of any in New Zealand though so im gonna stick with it.
     
  13. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    It's getting better
    Try to make it all the same size and make the p less edgy, more liek the r
    Try not to get your r into your u either makes it look kinda sloppy
    Also lose those two lines under itand the question mark
     
  14. Dalinquint

    Dalinquint New Member

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  15. oakstr1

    oakstr1 Senior Member

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    ^^^im feelin that^...not typical but i think its mad dope..i would close up the D a little bit(i think its a d)

    them phillys would look bomb painted.
     
  16. ZE-Jay

    ZE-Jay Member

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    dude anyone in the uk offering to give tips on best place to get stickaz
     
  17. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    order them off thebench504.com
     
  18. oakstr1

    oakstr1 Senior Member

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  19. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    its simple but it does seem like your writing akon-er (the rapper) if you pull it off its fine you just might get some stick
     
  20. tempest

    tempest Senior Member

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    lol. i always kno its u cuz u take the pictures underwater ;). get ri of that thingie in ur o. and ur r is 2 pointy and flowless(tht a word?). the bottom part of it shuld b like the btm part of the k and not rotated up