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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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    Techkanuck- dont like the simple underline too much, or the s
    dub255- if anything i like the 3rd one, but they all need more flow/style
    Shoook- i like it, especially the k
     
  2. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    Shok- I really like that S. It speaks to me, haha. And I have to agree, the lower case h does look better. Also, if that's supposed to read "Shok" close up the O.

    vois- I dig the yellow one.

    anek- Although that middle one does look a bit like "nine", it still looks badass. I guess make it look more like "anek", but don't lose that style. That looks nice.

    faze- I think theres a member on here who writes Faze. But who cares? He's not big. Probably nowhere near you. And besides, I don't think he posts anymore. Anyway, keep practicing, and staying simple like that. Writing your name over and over again. Until it turns into something you really like. Then post it again. Also, pay attention to the style's of writers in your area.

    [Broken External Image]:http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/historical/SSPX0050gif.jpg

    Can't tell which I like better. What do you guys think? Oh, and I screwed up the S and R on one of 'em. I know.
     
  3. RezOner..

    RezOner.. Banned

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    casic- the one on the standouts is alot better, keep your s like that.
    shok- space it out. specifically the h and s, try not to have them overlap.
    tech- work on that s, and maybe dont have the i and o connected.
    mashup, theres a chat forum, go there if you wanna find out what people write, i dont come on this to respond to some kid asking what we write.
     
  4. RezOner..

    RezOner.. Banned

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    second one, dope shit with the last three letters, change up the a though. the first a's good.
     
  5. Shoook

    Shoook Senior Member

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    my bad i guess i got to fix it cause its supose to read shuk
     
  6. Shoook

    Shoook Senior Member

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  7. MilkyCanvas

    MilkyCanvas Member

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    Just bumping because I got the last post on the last page.

    All right. Will do Rez. Thanks.
    There we go. I like that Shuk.
     
  8. Shoook

    Shoook Senior Member

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    im likin the first one aris but i like the s from the 2nd one
     
  9. ENOC

    ENOC Senior Member

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    these were done the other day. messed up on the M on the second one
     
  10. MessTonic

    MessTonic Senior Member

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    ^Im feelin them, good control but juice up the tip more so it doesnt look so faded.. and like you said work on your M's to make them more controlled
     
  11. shiva - the destroyer

    shiva - the destroyer Senior Member

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  12. dub255

    dub255 Member

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    aris-i like the first one, the only real difference is the A but the first A flows much better...way to leave me out on the crits:confused:
    Vame/Lame-the control is decent like tonic said, but the letters don't really flow to me...and lose the arrow on the second one, its whack

    these are simple, i know, its a base style to add on to...i think that the flow is pretty good though, crits??
     

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  13. ENOC

    ENOC Senior Member

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    aightt thanks for the tips.
     
  14. $1LENCR

    $1LENCR Member

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    ENOC-- juice the nib more so u don't get dem streaks...other than that, it's sik tag...stay up..
     
  15. $1LENCR

    $1LENCR Member

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  16. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai25.tinypic.com_2pocpjd.jpg
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    Different e, better or worse?
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    I've been trying to space out the letters and stuff crits?

    Lasic I like the top one best the s is nice and the tqag ispretty clean keepa t it
     
  17. Keke

    Keke Senior Member

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  18. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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    thanks

    i was going to take that one to the streets tonight but i dislocated my toe ahahaha... just got home from the hospital
     
  19. RezOner..

    RezOner.. Banned

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    tes- siiiiiiiiiiiiiiicccccccckkkkkk first one compared to the others. space em out just like that one, and youll be killin your scene in no time.
    enoc- played as fuck. sketch more, you need to get some style in there.
    keke- does that say nesta or vesta? space em out more. oh and lose that line above the v in the bottom one.
     
  20. brunorod

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