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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    That's dope arose, I'm thinking of doing you another one because of how much worse I was when I did yours.

    Failed concept but I guess the letters aren't bad, I need to improve my other art skills to compliment my graff.
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  2. MoganOne

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    Rade Going hard! I like that a lot man. @ Toop u live in Austria? I have a friend from there that writes Sike
     
  3. eido777

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  4. gears244

    gears244 Senior Member

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    Arose that's dope as fuck, Semper's too, I really like those buildings imo
     
  5. strongman

    strongman Senior Member

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    What about my canvas? I would like some feedback, anything will be nice. Thanks. I know I'm sounding whiny but I didn't get feedback
     
  6. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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    its a pretty clean good looking character. the eyes are kinda wack tho.
     
  7. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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    bottom page bump

    fakers quickie exchange, process:
    BARS:
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    EXTENSIONS/CONNECTIONS:
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    PEN:
    SAM_1330.jpg
    DETAILS:
    SAM_1333.jpg
    SAM_1334.jpg
    3D:
    SAM_1337.jpg
     
  8. strongman

    strongman Senior Member

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    The eyes are whack huh? How so? What can I do to make them better?
    Thanks.
     
  9. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  10. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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    I don't know... make the retnas black circles or sumthing. the mouth is generic looking too.
     
  11. gears244

    gears244 Senior Member

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    Huh I actually find it real useful/interesting when people post steps of their work like Arose did, here's a character i posted' didn't take flicks of all the steps but drew this a few days ago DSC02172.jpg DSC02174.jpg DSC02179.jpg DSC02190.jpg
     
  12. TastyMcNasty

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    that's actually one of the best pieces I've seen from you, which is saying something. I have done a piece in like 6 months haha
     
  13. UpperClass

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    God damn, you add so much useless shit to you letters. You should learn proper letter structure. You've been sucking ass for a long time now.
     
  14. gears244

    gears244 Senior Member

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    Jeez^^^ I like it flava but I'm not diggin the orange fill or lines you put. Would have looked a lot cleaner without them... I agree you need some sort of fill but you went a little far imo. Just my opinion though 1000 times better than anything I could produce with a can, I think its dope either way, haters going to hate...
     
  15. biblebeltbangerz

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    the technique looks great its the letters in general that aren't very good.
     
  16. gears244

    gears244 Senior Member

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    Ya I can see how most people wouldn't digg his style.....But technically speaking he definitely has decent can control and can blend colors well.. I agree his lettering could be better, it be nice to see him approach a different style to see what he can do with bars.
     
  17. strongman

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    How is the mouth generic looking? What else was I supposed to do? It's a mouth..
     
  18. gears244

    gears244 Senior Member

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    Got to agree with Flava on that one... Too many people are hung up on what graffity "SHOULD" look like when the soul purpose of the art is to express your style freely... Obviously you need skill and some sense of structure and perspective etc just like any other medium of art otherwise it will look like a 4 year old painted it. I enjoy old school stuff but always welcome a new take on anything...

    "Strongman....the character is clean, nothing wrong with it at all. It's just plain and when Bible says it`s Generic he means it`s a pretty common approach to drawing a cartoony mouth... If you are looking for crits on the design and creativity of the character then I`d say it`s plain as tits. But obviously that`s what you were going for when you painted this.

    If you want technical advice only thing i`d say that would make this look better is if you fixed the puppils and fill them in..
     
  19. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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    im not going to hold your hand thru the process of making a mouth. disreguard my crits since I don't know what im talking about with characters.
     
  20. biblebeltbangerz

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    your "newer style" LOL looks like some overused 90's bullshit tho... youre coming off like a little fagola.