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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.
tried to clean it up a lil more than my usual sharpie mess
Omlet, I don't really like that piece. The structure is pretty off and the effects you were going for with the colors didn't turn out clean.
Kusto, that K is straight beasty.
I'm having a hard time trying to complicate my letters without making them look like absolute shit, so I've been trying to simplify them to as basic as I can make them and still keep it clean, Iunno, some bullshit.
Crits are welcome
2nd edit: Crit me down? Pointers?
Banko: I'm diggin' that green outline.
Eats: The first one looks cool. The 2nd one is cool, just the T kinda looks like an E and the extension on the E looks a lil weird. The 3rd one is cool but the A looks too much like a V. Other then that cool stuff bro.
Salski, that shit is clean.
The Bender is in progress
Finished the Bender piece. Damn, that's such a good show. Trying to avoid clogging the thread with too many posts, so I'll just edit this one.
Good lookin' out Germs
IBU i think maybe for now take it back a step and simplify a bit..i know your stuff is steezy as fuck from seeing your throws and tags but with your piecing i think maybe your trying to force it abit much? keep your letters suttle but affective..suttle steeze i guess i dunno. keep at it man!
looking good banko and sal
im liking that stufff eatso, i see with that one green and purple piece it sorta looks like you combined that one older style you posted with something else..looks cool just keep doing your thing man!
Like it eatso, but imho, in Bender, you add too many cracks and you don't need to add arrows on B & R. It will pop better...
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Great one Bugs!
Agus, in my opinion its really not working, but that might just be me
Ralpmet: In what part?
yehh bugs im digging that, that bottom leg of the R with the heart like attachment jumps outa the page like its gonna punch a dude in the face
nice agus, only thing i can say is that extension coming into the centre of your D from the bottom bar looks kinda off to be but thats prob just personal preference..try to mess around with the background some more man! keep at it
was experimenting with this and got kinda lost/stuck..crits appreciated
thanks Turban. I see it. I'm not sure with my background. Since it often ruined my sketches.
By the way, I can't see your sketch... the pencil was blurry..
Really digging that piece bugs. Only thing that bothers me is the bottom left side of the S. Feel like he could use some protein and come a little stronger.
Ralpmet: Thanks. Haven't seen you on here in a while.
Turban: Thanks bro. That sketch is cool, I see where you were headed with it. The G and E are a little too much for that R. If
you simplified everything to match the R or made the R more intricate it would work.
Moler: Thanks bro. Yeah, I know what you mean I saw it to after I inked it. Gotta learn and keep on moving.
Agus: That little thing in the inside of the D really stands out in a bad way. Also if you would've added an extension to the
bottom of the leg on the R, like the F, it would've looked a lot better. Also no thingy on the bottom middle of the M.
Keep it up homie.
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got it Bugs..
btw, nice quickies Eats...
Naked: I'm diggin' that outerspace sketch.
Eatso: Nice throwie.
Here's a quick one, just messing around with letters...
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Looks ill, I just think the left bar on the W is too thin, but wtf do I know, my pieces suck. That A and R look so beast though.
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