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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Abesk

    Abesk Senior Member

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    That's steezy as fuck.
     
  2. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    @Absek thanks my man
     
  3. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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  4. quickiehand

    quickiehand Senior Member

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    thats that hangover can control style haha
     
  5. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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  6. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    damn your can control is weak. better work on that...

    that Porvas is coo though, not feelin the R. Should post his shit and not yours ;)
     
  7. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    where the hell did you see porvas?
     
  8. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    haha! looks like it was Voras, I saw it then later wrote the commment so I was going off my memory. I was pretty close though huh?

    how you been though phat? you ever gunna leave beirut?
    I like your sig, that kid wants the D. Go get em.
     
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  9. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    maybe, but why would I?
     
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  10. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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  11. scaper

    scaper Senior Member

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    starting move on from handstyles I need brutal honest crits guys. Not exactly blackbook but says THIZE crit please
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  12. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    I'll leave those for you my man, already got the ones I care about...
    I'd rather stay here and get paper instead :)
     
  13. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Looking dope Phat That shaky style is tight generates a sense of movement.
     
  14. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    ok, brutal crits! here we go!
    Scaper, actually, it's not as bad as you might think, you're on the right track - in its very early stages though.
    I usually don't like to comment based on personal preferences to keep the crits objective, but if I had to pick out 3 things that bother me here are:

    1- Your cleanliness. Do your best to make your lines as clean and crisp as possible. They need to look like you nailed them from the very first take. I cannot stress this enough on these forums: The inked outlines HAVE to be the step that takes you the most time in your sketch. (I'll jam a side note here about how you should rotate your image when posting here if you're looking for more feedback)

    2- The 3D needs to be more accurate. either have all your barcodes perfectly parallel to each other or all converging towards the same point. So many tutorials about this on youtube... should be easy if you're older than a teenager.

    3- I'm not a fan of how your bars' outlines cross the corners. Sure it might give your letters a little volume or make them look a little more stylized, but I think it's premature. Because it takes a certain eye to decide which of the 2 outlines should cross the corner to give the letter the RIGHT looking movement in regards to its whole flow. And that eye takes practice and experience to develop. So in my opinion, use that energy elsewhere in your graffiti right now: ideally on your bars' flow - Opt for slightly curved instead of completely straight...

    Take your bars like your women:
    too curvy - she's trying way too hard and ending up looking like a bimbo.
    too stiff - practically a dude.
    well balanced - Margot fuckin Robbie


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    some chrome:

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  15. IbuprofenTablets

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  16. RatyzOne

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    Don't know where to post this... I fucked up the R badly...

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  17. IbuprofenTablets

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  18. PUTS

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    Ima get yo stuff posted up in a few minutes...
     
  19. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    Here you go. The letter combo just makes it so hard for me to get it to look good. I need to work on my L's. I might get a throwie up someday, im shit at them so whatever good practice I guess.
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  20. Arose.One

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    Pizza box quickie:
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