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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.
That's steezy as fuck.
@Absek thanks my man
that reptile's stoned af
still have hopes for a proper modern-day standards MK movie tho
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quick leftover joint with the boys down in toulouse
thats that hangover can control style haha
naaah it's done on purpose, here's a few other examples from 2015
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damn your can control is weak. better work on that...
that Porvas is coo though, not feelin the R. Should post his shit and not yours
where the hell did you see porvas?
haha! looks like it was Voras, I saw it then later wrote the commment so I was going off my memory. I was pretty close though huh?
how you been though phat? you ever gunna leave beirut?
I like your sig, that kid wants the D. Go get em.
maybe, but why would I?
to get real ups
starting move on from handstyles I need brutal honest crits guys. Not exactly blackbook but says THIZE crit please
I'll leave those for you my man, already got the ones I care about...
I'd rather stay here and get paper instead
Looking dope Phat That shaky style is tight generates a sense of movement.
ok, brutal crits! here we go!
Scaper, actually, it's not as bad as you might think, you're on the right track - in its very early stages though.
I usually don't like to comment based on personal preferences to keep the crits objective, but if I had to pick out 3 things that bother me here are:
1- Your cleanliness. Do your best to make your lines as clean and crisp as possible. They need to look like you nailed them from the very first take. I cannot stress this enough on these forums: The inked outlines HAVE to be the step that takes you the most time in your sketch. (I'll jam a side note here about how you should rotate your image when posting here if you're looking for more feedback)
2- The 3D needs to be more accurate. either have all your barcodes perfectly parallel to each other or all converging towards the same point. So many tutorials about this on youtube... should be easy if you're older than a teenager.
3- I'm not a fan of how your bars' outlines cross the corners. Sure it might give your letters a little volume or make them look a little more stylized, but I think it's premature. Because it takes a certain eye to decide which of the 2 outlines should cross the corner to give the letter the RIGHT looking movement in regards to its whole flow. And that eye takes practice and experience to develop. So in my opinion, use that energy elsewhere in your graffiti right now: ideally on your bars' flow - Opt for slightly curved instead of completely straight...
Take your bars like your women:
too curvy - she's trying way too hard and ending up looking like a bimbo.
too stiff - practically a dude.
well balanced - Margot fuckin Robbie
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Heres a couple hands
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Don't know where to post this... I fucked up the R badly...
Heres a toss and hand
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Ima get yo stuff posted up in a few minutes...
Here you go. The letter combo just makes it so hard for me to get it to look good. I need to work on my L's. I might get a throwie up someday, im shit at them so whatever good practice I guess.
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