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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    Ok ill try to simplify my big ones, also focusing on shadow now cause it feels easier to me


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  2. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Anyone interested, new battle is up in the Battle Forum.

    Word is: SUMO Due: Friday 28th
     
  3. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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  4. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    Dont mind the shitty letters, the character was the focus!

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  5. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    Thought id give it a shot

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  6. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Not bad. The issue with your letters is legibility. They're hard to make out at first. The hardest to make out is the S. The W is a little off at first because of the bottom on the right. You should have the letters be one solid piece. Also, the spikey things are not working, they kinda throw off the letters.
     
  7. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    Hm kay ill try to dump the spikey ones. If youd look up theres the sketch for the wallpiece. I dont see an issue with legibiltly to be honest, maybe the S but i think i came up with my own unique type and im trying to improve it further. Thanks for the feedback much appreciated!
     
  8. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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  9. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Damn Phat, that almost looks wet.
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  10. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    Heavy shark! Very nice

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  11. PUTS

    PUTS Elite Member

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    Like the fill of the first piece Nzane! The T and the A looked like they merged together into a K tho.
    Dope stuff Bugs, style looks a bit different from the usual but it's nice.
     
  12. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Thanks, Nzane.

    Thanks, PUTS. Yeah, it's a little different. It's a little more simple and happier looking, I think.
     
  13. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    nZane Senior Member

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  15. SuicOne

    SuicOne Member

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    How many names do you have? Like it, but the shadow should have been a 2 tone one

    can't really make out the first letter (think it's a ''z'' and the third is a k right?) But if your known at you're area it ain't a problem
     
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  16. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    the blocks are yellow with a faded green shadow drop (dunno what you mean with shadow). I dont write my name i write the letters im feeling at the moment. First letter is a T, but props for recon the K :)
    And nah im not known (yet), but i wanna go way bigger than anyone would expect.
     
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  17. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    inzane slow your roll a bit
    letters are unreadable. you're trying to go wildstyle without mastering simples first. Every beginner's mistake. always eager to improve never willing to invest the time. you dont see an issue with legibiltly coz you painted it, genius.
    as a rule of thumb, if users here tell you it's illegible, then it really is illegible.
    there's waaaaay too much going on in such a small amount of space. your colors don't really match well. all your bars are the same width, going in all kinds of different directions and always overlapping and criss crossing and whatnot... way too wobbly. no overall attractive flow for the whole piece.
    opt for repetition, unity, composition, harmony. Your letters should each stand out by itself and they should all look like they belong to the same family or "font"

    i donno if all this makes sense to you

    anyway, please, everyone, more pics less blabber.

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  18. nZane

    nZane Senior Member

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    Thanks for the advice! Is this better then?
    I like your phatz more then this gibberish of the other artist btw
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  19. ESONE.

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    Pretty sure he did both
     
  20. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Phat maybe they didn't like the fact that you put a STD on their wall.