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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.
Ok ill try to simplify my big ones, also focusing on shadow now cause it feels easier to me
Anyone interested, new battle is up in the Battle Forum.
Word is: SUMO Due: Friday 28th
talk about shit 3d...oops
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Dont mind the shitty letters, the character was the focus!
Thought id give it a shot
Not bad. The issue with your letters is legibility. They're hard to make out at first. The hardest to make out is the S. The W is a little off at first because of the bottom on the right. You should have the letters be one solid piece. Also, the spikey things are not working, they kinda throw off the letters.
Hm kay ill try to dump the spikey ones. If youd look up theres the sketch for the wallpiece. I dont see an issue with legibiltly to be honest, maybe the S but i think i came up with my own unique type and im trying to improve it further. Thanks for the feedback much appreciated!
Damn Phat, that almost looks wet.
Heavy shark! Very nice
Like the fill of the first piece Nzane! The T and the A looked like they merged together into a K tho.
Dope stuff Bugs, style looks a bit different from the usual but it's nice.
Thanks, PUTS. Yeah, it's a little different. It's a little more simple and happier looking, I think.
How many names do you have? Like it, but the shadow should have been a 2 tone one
can't really make out the first letter (think it's a ''z'' and the third is a k right?) But if your known at you're area it ain't a problem
the blocks are yellow with a faded green shadow drop (dunno what you mean with shadow). I dont write my name i write the letters im feeling at the moment. First letter is a T, but props for recon the K
And nah im not known (yet), but i wanna go way bigger than anyone would expect.
inzane slow your roll a bit
letters are unreadable. you're trying to go wildstyle without mastering simples first. Every beginner's mistake. always eager to improve never willing to invest the time. you dont see an issue with legibiltly coz you painted it, genius.
as a rule of thumb, if users here tell you it's illegible, then it really is illegible.
there's waaaaay too much going on in such a small amount of space. your colors don't really match well. all your bars are the same width, going in all kinds of different directions and always overlapping and criss crossing and whatnot... way too wobbly. no overall attractive flow for the whole piece.
opt for repetition, unity, composition, harmony. Your letters should each stand out by itself and they should all look like they belong to the same family or "font"
i donno if all this makes sense to you
anyway, please, everyone, more pics less blabber.
Thanks for the advice! Is this better then?
I like your phatz more then this gibberish of the other artist btw
Pretty sure he did both
Phat maybe they didn't like the fact that you put a STD on their wall.
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