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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    Your so clean lol . . graffitis main points are letters then lines then colors and you fall short on the first two . you fix those and no body can say shit your color r fine iv said this befor. But you dont see it I dont know how els to break it down for you . if you zoom on every thing u do your lines are always janky . as for letters you dont underatand how they cant bend . or where they cant get skiney but you do it any way and thats why its wrong . and looks wrong . (not just to me ) you wanna acutly improve watch some grim . abcrit on youtube . he breaks every thi g down in a way better then most of us can . but once you summit I can tell you the first thing hes gon a say is keep it simple keep it simple keep it simple !

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  2. Matt Wrigh

    Matt Wrigh Elite Member

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    You've got to be kidding me man. Your shit is always janky and that's without zooming way in on it!! Your paper is usually smudged and torn up and you have perspective issues!! I have never claimed my shit is perfect and there is always stuff to improve on but as I've said before, there is a reason we are both posting in the TOYS forum. I will agree some of your pieces are better than mine but I also know that some of my pieces are better than yours. I propose we just leave it at that because I'm over all this back and forth bullshit!!!
     
  3. Ray of Today

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  4. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    You have not done one peace that is better then my fucking handstyle dude . your the one with a perspective issue . my lines are. Jank sure thing bro thats the reason I wasnt alowed to post here in the first place I have majorly improved that in the last year your blind if you dont see that every thing iv done latly has been with a sharpie I'll take the pen back out for you if you want when u can paint a peace half this clean with the same dollar cans I use then holla at me till then just stay in your lane witch isnt in This thread or the other black book thread . its in the toy black book thread . with the other people that think your shit is even remotley good on any actual level

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  5. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    What does paper smudge have to do with my peace or letters or lines it doesnt . iv seen the nastyest peaces on burnt fucking papper and half pages peaces . life happens pappers get riped... its and astectic I wouldnt expect a hipster like your self to grasp
     
  6. Matt Wrigh

    Matt Wrigh Elite Member

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    Sorry....I didnt realize SLOPPY was the look you were going for!!Lol when I said perspective issues, I meant in your drawings. How is your character's head gonna be behind the word and yet he's supposed to be on the other side of the street??? You are a TOY just like me except I dont have the ego problem that you do!! I post in different threads so that I can reach different audiences and have gotten good feedback in every thread!! You are the only one that wants to constantly hate. That sucks you got shit on here for so long but it's time to move on guy. You are not a mod so unless you have constructive crits for me besides " only do simples" , just keep it to yourself. I will keep doing my thing and you can keep doing yours!
     
  7. Matt Wrigh

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  8. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    Becuse the letters are graffiit and do what they want just like yours no ?

    Your correcting me on that art fag shit not even remotely graffiti related .
    And yeah the sloppy grime look is what I have inspired for.. for many years the only reason I even did and atemped. To do clean stuff was to show that I can to the people that kept deleting my shit .befor I went back to my grime shit .
    Stick to your stencils. There the best thing you got going for you .

    The mods will enevetulay set you stight .
     
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  9. Matt Wrigh

    Matt Wrigh Elite Member

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    Just sayin......He who lives in a glass house shouldnt throw stones!
     
  10. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    Dude you have to be on some seriously good shit if you fucking think your shit is fucking close to mine to be calling my shit a glass house . your lettera are the isue not your gay ass extra art . so for me to corect your horrible fucking letters when mine are propper is not a glass house . now if i said your art its self was trash and then youd have a point but most of your extra shit if fine i ha e also said that befor . the thing is your not getting the basic letters that we are talki g about even the letters you did yes they are simpler but they are not simps basic letters you fail to get what we mean bye that and that is why I said to check out grim on youtube he can 3xplaine betters or I'll lo9ks for some exanples on here .
     
  11. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    Here are two I think you could benifite from .
    Like for real watch em . theres some more I'll try to find them
     
  12. Loctorak

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    Steady on. Ill be the first to say im not good, but ignoring the fact that i consider any writer to be "not good enough" to beef like that online (point being dont beef online no matter WHO you are... cause its dumb), i dunno why my ability needed to be brought into it? It changes nothing about the fact that bickering isn't helpful for anyone so they should stop, does it? If i said "water is good for you" and then you find out im a toy are you gonna suddenly stop drinking water? Either way, ive never met you so hello. Always nice to meet new folks and im glad to know you think my stuff is so offensively shit that you had to bring it up, but still that level of "uninspiring trash" that you cant even bother referencing me by my 8 letter name and instead go for the 20 letter monstrosity of "badypnose aspirant guy"... thats a special level of "shit on my boot" hatred right there :D
     
  13. gumOnShoe

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    Bro relax it's not a big deal you just cant post here cause it's not intermediate that's all. I don't hate you wtf lol
     
  14. Aristo

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    You guys are seriously soft as fuck lmao. Why is it so hard to accept the critiques of others? I got critiques that were 10x harsher on my old account and I accepted them. What did I do? I took their advice and now look where I'm at. Even if it might sound rude what's being said might just be true. You should always consider what other people say no matter what. If multiple people critique your pieces and say the same thing every time then I would consider working on what they said.
     
  15. Matt Wrigh

    Matt Wrigh Elite Member

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    Agreed...but there is a difference between a critique and being disrespectful (i.e. drawing your name all over other peoples shit with the intent to be disrespectful). That is no different than lining someone elses shit out or buffing their piece on the street. I have no problem with constructive crits but do have a problem with disrespectful assholes!!!
     
  16. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    Cus I drew on your fake buildings . wow dont have a anal prolaps over it .
    Or your other peace I drew over in Photo shop becuse you wrote fuck elbow . lol . .
    Your shit would get line in real life too . probly moped threw or crome hand right thre it
     
  17. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    Facts bro .....
    go read shit around page 400 of this thread and see how fucking rude people where to every one that wasnt as good shit was crazy bro lol .

    I thought you seemed fimilure . you wrote the same word befor right or close to it . like idk 2 -3years ago maybe even more then that ?
     
  18. Matt Wrigh

    Matt Wrigh Elite Member

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    I'm chill...just explaining to Aristo why you can eat a bag of dicks:)
     
  19. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    Sure thing hipster

    Heres another "trash canvas"

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  20. Matt Wrigh

    Matt Wrigh Elite Member

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    I dont give a fuck how things used to be!! Get over it dog!! Ive been coming to the site for a little over a year now and the only person I have had ANY issue with is you!!! Most of the people on this site are cool and Ive gotten some good feedback and tips from them. What did you say before?..."just stay in your lane and keep my name out your mouth and we're fine"