Your so clean lol . . graffitis main points are letters then lines then colors and you fall short on the first two . you fix those and no body can say shit your color r fine iv said this befor. But you dont see it I dont know how els to break it down for you . if you zoom on every thing u do your lines are always janky . as for letters you dont underatand how they cant bend . or where they cant get skiney but you do it any way and thats why its wrong . and looks wrong . (not just to me ) you wanna acutly improve watch some grim . abcrit on youtube . he breaks every thi g down in a way better then most of us can . but once you summit I can tell you the first thing hes gon a say is keep it simple keep it simple keep it simple !