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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. ASOHLE

    ASOHLE Member

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    Didn’t clock the green to blue fade straight away, nice touch!
     
  2. ElbowMacK187

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  3. zombie_hemp

    zombie_hemp Senior Member

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    now I know bevels are a bitch, but the bevels are way off and its best to do it on paper before painting it but it's a very nice attempt regardless
     
  4. ElbowMacK187

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    I have drawn it on paper it wasn't the plan that day just ended up being the out come

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  5. ElbowMacK187

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  6. Matt Wrigh

    Matt Wrigh Senior Member

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    I know we have had our differences but have to give the devil it's due. Your can control is getting pretty nice. I have def. seen significant improvement over your earlier vids!! Not gonna lie......a little jealous of the practice wall which I'm assuming is at the crib.
     
  7. ElbowMacK187

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    Its at my moms house she wanted the trees cut so they didnt fall on her house so I had them cut then built this in the clearing along her property line . hopefully grow it longer over time . prob gonna end up with the house in the future but curently I dont live there just go vist mom and paint lol its always a good time haha .
    And fore sure man that last knucks is solid as fuck cant even front on it probly gonna get my vote .
     
  8. ElbowMacK187

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    Are these bevels right lol hahaha

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  9. Supra475

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    upload_2020-5-7_21-7-48.jpeg Ha i know this is pretty trash but i cant pit my finger on why. I know some of my lines are kinda janky but im just tryna practice letter structure
     
  10. ElbowMacK187

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  11. Supra475

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    Thats pretty sick
     
  12. Sanguine

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  13. ElbowMacK187

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  14. Switch Technique

    Switch Technique Senior Member

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    Literally my first painted piece ever (minus commissioned legal stuff) . Simple thing out in the middle of no where. Crit if u want

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  15. gumOnShoe

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    Why is the V so small?
    You should make the V connect to the Y with a thin line in the middle of the connection to distinguish the Y from the V . like you did with the kick on the n where it tucks in behind the vertical bar of the n.
    Have you considered a capital Y? those are really cool to play around with its structure is like a U or V on top with a vertical bar attached to the bottom, there are many ways to embellish a single vertical bar, and there are many ways to embellish V's and U's, you can really go ham like that.

    your piece would look better in all caps especially with this connection scheme you have going, would look so dope.
     
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  16. gumOnShoe

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    Im feelin so good, im still in the hood, put the piff in the wood then give her the wood, i figure i should, got me misunderstood, i never was born, live forever and on

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  17. Ray of Today

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    True, all caps or same sized letters would look better here. Personally I'd look at that right side of the V plus your Y as your whole Y so that the stem of your y comes down to the left and back up aligned with the y's top left bar. If you do that, it also gives a nice space for the right side of your V to snuggle up against.

    In your piece the top left bar of the Y is a little jacked. I don't neccessarily like that extension of it off to the left. However, you could tweak that outline where you could bring the left side of your V up to the same height as your other letters and you could have that piece of Y kick over a little to form the top right of your V.

    The white outer, you've used the white to fill in your negative space as well, which makes more of a cloud effect, so I probably would have squished a little bubble up between the split in the V and out the sides of your E and Y to be consistent and make it flow better.
     
  18. gumOnShoe

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    Did you finally cool down? Idk man you kept making these accounts but i was blocking them faster than you were making them.
     
  19. Ray of Today

    Ray of Today Elite Member

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    Told you more than once, I'm 1 dude w/ the same 1 account.
     
  20. gumOnShoe

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    If you say so urban. And you posted your tags on this account so I know its you.